The Annotated Edition
Ave Atque Vale by Algernon Charles Swinburne
Swinburne composed this lengthy elegy in memory of the French poet Charles Baudelaire, who passed away in 1867.
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Shall I strew on thee rose or rue or laurel, / Brother, on this that was the veil of thee?
Editor's note
Swinburne begins his reflection at Baudelaire's grave, contemplating which flowers to leave as a tribute. He describes the body as a "veil"—merely a covering that conceals the true individual beneath. He considers various flowers, each with its own significance: roses symbolize love, rue represents grief, and laurel stands for poetic glory. Ultimately, the choice of flowers isn't the main concern; it centers on how to pay homage to someone whose art was both peculiar and profound.
For always thee the fervid languid glories / Allured of heavier suns in mightier skies;
Editor's note
Swinburne captures Baudelaire's artistic nature: he preferred the intense, sultry sensations of the south over the cooler vibes of the north. His mentions of Lesbian promontories and the Leucadian grave call to mind Sappho, the ancient Greek poet known for her writings on deep passion. By doing this, Swinburne connects Baudelaire to a line of poets who lived fervently and faced the consequences.
Thou sawest, in thine old singing season, brother, / Secrets and sorrows unbeheld of us:
Editor's note
This stanza celebrates Baudelaire's distinctive perspective — he noticed aspects that other poets either overlooked or shied away from: "fierce loves," toxic beauty, nameless sins, and pleasures that defy description. The line "as men sow men reap" ties all that vivid imagery to a straightforward moral truth: Baudelaire recognized the consequences inherent in every desire.
O sleepless heart and sombre soul unsleeping, / That were athirst for sleep and no more life
Editor's note
Swinburne tackles Baudelaire's weariness head-on. The man longed for peace — from love, from conflict, from the very act of being aware. Now, death has granted him that rest. Swinburne softly wonders, without any real assurance, if it's truly better for Baudelaire in this state, where pleasure carries no pain and the soul has released itself from the body.
It is enough; the end and the beginning / Are one thing to thee, who art past the end.
Editor's note
Death brings time to a standstill for the deceased — the past and future lose all significance. Swinburne enumerates what Baudelaire has lost: ambition, struggle, desire. What lingers are merely "dead yew-leaves and a little dust." The yew, known as a traditional graveyard tree, symbolizes this finality. The stanza conveys a gentle, yet unsentimental tone — Swinburne does not romanticize death.
Now all strange hours and all strange loves are over, / Dreams and desires and sombre songs and sweet,
Editor's note
Swinburne envisions Baudelaire in the underworld, reclining at the feet of a magnificent, goddess-like figure — a "pale Titan-woman." This imagery reflects the mythological figures that permeate Baudelaire's poetry. The scene is vast and nurturing, implying that death embraces the poet like the earth embraces the dead: with a cold, grand indifference.
Hast thou found any likeness for thy vision? / O gardener of strange flowers, what bud, what bloom,
Editor's note
Swinburne launches a barrage of unanswerable questions at the dead poet. The title *Les Fleurs du Mal* (Flowers of Evil) resonates in referring to Baudelaire as a "gardener of strange flowers." Does the afterlife hold anything resembling his vision? Are its fruits grey or vibrant? The questions accumulate without any answers — and that’s precisely the point.
Alas, but though my flying song flies after, / O sweet strange elder singer, thy more fleet
Editor's note
Swinburne acknowledges that his poem falls short of capturing Baudelaire's essence. The only sounds from the underworld that the living can perceive are faint echoes: a "dim derision of mysterious laughter," a fleeting vision of Proserpine (the queen of the dead), and a few sighs from the departed. The references to Proserpine and the "blind tongueless warders of the dead" draw directly from classical mythology, emphasizing the true separation between the living and the dead.
Thou art far too far for wings of words to follow, / Far too far off for thought or any prayer.
Editor's note
This is the emotional core of the poem. Poetry, thought, and prayer can't bridge the divide between the living and the dead. Dreams pursue death like the wind pursues fire, always close but never quite reaching. The stanza candidly acknowledges the limitations of elegy: you write it for your own sake, not for the one who's passed away.
Not thee, O never thee, in all time's changes, / Not thee, but this the sound of thy sad soul,
Editor's note
Swinburne highlights an important point: while he can't connect with Baudelaire directly, he can engage with Baudelaire's *work* — the "shut scroll," the melodies, the memories. Holding the book brings him as close as possible to holding the man's hand. This stanza reshapes the entire elegy: it becomes a communion with a body of writing, rather than a spirit.
I among these, I also, in such station / As when the pyre was charred, and piled the sods,
Editor's note
Swinburne aligns himself with the tradition of ancient mourners who made offerings at funeral pyres. He engages in a ritual devoid of prayer — he doesn't hold faith in the gods he's calling upon, yet the act still holds significance. By cutting a lock of hair and placing it on the tomb, he directly references Orestes mourning his father Agamemnon at his grave in Aeschylus.
But by no hand nor any treason stricken, / Not like the low-lying head of Him, the King,
Editor's note
Baudelaire's death wasn't marked by violence or betrayal, unlike Agamemnon, "the King," whose demise gave significance to the Trojan War. Instead, his passing was quieter and more intimate. Swinburne notes that even the Muses, the goddesses of art, grieve for Baudelaire, offering him a tribute that surpasses any human sorrow. This mourning transcends the personal, reaching a cosmic depth.
For, sparing of his sacred strength, not often / Among us darkling here the lord of light
Editor's note
Apollo, the god of poetry and the sun, seldom inspires a human poet with true passion. Swinburne suggests that Baudelaire was one of those exceptional few—nourished by "bitter wine" and "bitter bread," which resonates with both the Eucharist and the sorrow found in *Les Fleurs du Mal*. The gift of poetry brings pain, yet it remains a sacred blessing.
Therefore he too now at thy soul's sunsetting, / God of all suns and songs, he too bends down
Editor's note
Apollo mourns Baudelaire at his death, blending laurel (symbolizing poetry) with cypress (representing mourning). The sight of a god bowing to honor a mortal is poignant because it flips the typical act of worship. Swinburne suggests that Baudelaire's art was so impactful that even the divine feels compelled to recognize it.
And one weeps with him in the ways Lethean, / And stains with tears her changing bosom chill:
Editor's note
Venus — yet a changed, fallen version of herself — also grieves for Baudelaire by the river Lethe (the river of forgetting in the underworld). This is the Venus from Tannhäuser, the "obscure Venus of the hollow hill," a character Swinburne referenced in other works: a goddess of love transformed into something darker and more perilous, no longer just a Greek figure but medieval and ominous. She captivated Baudelaire in life through his obsessions; now she mourns him in death.
And now no sacred staff shall break in blossom, / No choral salutation lure to light
Editor's note
No miracle will bring Baudelaire back. The "sacred staff" that blossoms refers to the legend of Tannhäuser's staff flowering as a sign of forgiveness — but no such sign appears here. Swinburne acknowledges the finality of death directly: songs can't clarify death or extend life. All he can do is fill the grave with wild notes and wild vines.
Sleep; and if life was bitter to thee, pardon, / If sweet, give thanks; thou hast no more to live;
Editor's note
Swinburne gives Baudelaire a straightforward and kind farewell: if life was tough, let it go; if it was joyful, appreciate it. In the end, it’s all in the past. The "mystic and the mournful garden," where Baudelaire spun "sick flowers of secrecy and shade," represents both his actual creations and the inner landscape of *Les Fleurs du Mal*. Ultimately, death leads us all to the same destination.
For thee, O now a silent soul, my brother, / Take at my hands this garland, and farewell.
Editor's note
The final stanza presents the moment of laying down the garland — the culmination of everything the poem has been leading up to. The earth is referred to as a "fatal mother," with a tomb in her breast, reminiscent of Niobe, the mythological figure who mourned the loss of all her children. The poem concludes with a vision of complete stillness: no wind, no sound, no struggle. It reflects the peace that Baudelaire sought, and Swinburne captures it beautifully in words.
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§05Symbols & metaphors
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- Flowers (rose, rue, laurel, yew)
- Each flower holds its own meaning: roses symbolize love, rue represents grief and regret, laurel stands for poetic achievement, and yew signifies death and mourning. Collectively, they illustrate the breadth of Baudelaire's identity and the significance of his loss. The garland Swinburne ultimately places down is delicate and cold — a sincere tribute, rather than a victorious one.
- The shut scroll / the book
- Baudelaire's collected poems, *Les Fleurs du Mal*, serve as the sole tangible link between the living Swinburne and the deceased Baudelaire. Holding the book is like grasping the man's hand. It symbolizes how art endures even after the artist has passed away.
- Proserpine
- Proserpine, the Roman goddess of the underworld, is often seen shrouded in mystery, appearing only faintly. She embodies the definitive line between the living and the dead — you can sense her presence, but never fully see her. This elusive quality also ties into Baudelaire's deep interest in dark, forbidden beauty.
- The severed curl of hair
- The lock of hair, drawn from the scene in Aeschylus where Orestes grieves at his father's tomb, serves as a tangible remnant of the mourner left with the deceased. It transforms grief into something physical and genuine, rather than merely literary. Swinburne is engaging in an ancient ritual to pay tribute to a contemporary poet.
- Apollo (the lord of light)
- The Greek god of poetry and the sun embodies the divine inspiration for poets. Swinburne uses him to suggest that Baudelaire's talent — no matter how somber the themes — was truly sacred. Even Apollo stoops to grieve for him.
- The obscure Venus of the hollow hill
- This is a medieval, fallen version of the goddess of love — the Venus from the Venusberg legend, linked to dangerous and consuming desire. She embodies the erotic and rebellious energies that fueled Baudelaire's poetry, and her presence at his death implies that those forces took him over entirely.
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