The Annotated Edition
ATROPOS. by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
In this brief poem, the speaker calls out to Atropos — one of the three Fates in Greek mythology — urging her to stop luring a serious, forward-thinking individual and instead direct her distractions toward someone with time to spare.
- Meter
- trochaic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- AABCDDDC
- Themes
- dreams, identity, mortality
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Tempt no more the noble schemer; / Bear unto some idle dreamer
Editor's note
The speaker tells Atropos directly: stop bothering the "noble schemer" — someone with real plans and ambitions — and instead take whatever temptation she has to an "idle dreamer." The contrast is clear from the start: purposeful action versus passive fantasy. In Greek mythology, Atropos is the Fate who cuts the thread of life, but in this context, she serves more broadly as a bringer of distraction and temptation that can alter fate.
This new toy and fascination, / This new dalliance and delight!
Editor's note
The temptation is described using somewhat dismissive terms like "toy" and "dalliance," which suggest that it is trivial and not deserving of serious consideration. The use of "new" twice emphasizes how temporary and easily substituted these pleasures are. They are simply novelties, lacking any lasting significance.
To the garden where reposes / Epimetheus crowned with roses,
Editor's note
Epimetheus is the Titan from Greek mythology whose name means "afterthought" — he tends to act first and think later, unlike his brother Prometheus, whose name means "forethought." Longfellow portrays him relaxing in a garden, adorned with roses, embodying a classic image of someone fully immersed in the moment without a care for the consequences. He is the ideal target for Atropos's distractions.
To the door that never closes / Upon pleasure and temptation,
Editor's note
Epimetheus's world is completely open to indulgence—his door is always inviting pleasure and temptation, never closed to them. This reflects a welcoming attitude toward vice, but it also serves as a gentle warning: a life without closed doors or boundaries lacks discipline and direction.
Bring this vision of the night!
Editor's note
The final line refers to the temptation as a "vision of the night" — something dreamy and unreal, tied to darkness rather than the bright clarity of day. This emphasizes that what Atropos offers is an illusion rather than something real. The speaker desires to rid themselves of it, sending it to someone who dwells in dreams instead of living a purposeful, waking life.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Atropos
- In Greek myth, she is the Fate who cuts the thread of life, but in this context, she symbolizes temptation and distraction — the force that can derail a purposeful life if you allow it.
- The noble schemer
- A person with serious ambition and a forward-thinking mindset, someone whose plans deserve protection from distractions. While the term "schemer" may carry a negative connotation today, Longfellow uses it with admiration — this is a Promethean figure, one who looks ahead.
- Epimetheus crowned with roses
- The mythological Titan of afterthought represents a life focused solely on immediate pleasure, ignoring any concerns for the future. The roses are lovely, but they also serve as a classic symbol of transient, sensory delight.
- The garden
- A space for relaxation and sensory enjoyment, intentionally set apart from the realm of the "noble schemer." Gardens in this style resonate with the essence of Eden — lovely, yet also a setting where temptation can thrive.
- The door that never closes
- An image of a life without any resistance to temptation or self-discipline. A door that remains open all the time can't keep anything out — not even things that should be turned away.
- Vision of the night
- The temptation is referred to as a night-vision, connecting it to dreams, the unreal, and the irrational. It is part of darkness, not the bright, clear world of focused effort.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- trochaic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- AABCDDDC
§07Historical context
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§08FAQ
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