The Annotated Edition
To the Driving Cloud by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Longfellow speaks to a visiting Omaha chief as he walks through a bustling city, turning the poem into a reflection on the impact of westward expansion on Native American communities and their traditions.
- Core theme
- Exile
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§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Gloomy and dark art thou, O chief of the mighty Omahas; / Gloomy and dark as the driving cloud, whose name thou hast taken!
Editor's note
Longfellow begins by speaking directly to the Omaha chief, consistently using the second person throughout the poem. The chief's name translates to 'driving cloud,' and Longfellow quickly embraces that imagery — dark, shifting, and ungraspable. The tone is serious right from the outset. The stanza's final question — what will remain of your people but footprints? — hits hard like a judgment before the argument is fully presented, likening the Omaha to ancient birds whose only evidence is their fossilized imprints in stone.
How canst thou walk these streets, who hast trod the green turf of the prairies! / How canst thou breathe this air, who hast breathed the sweet air of the mountains!
Editor's note
This stanza highlights a stark contrast between the chief's natural surroundings and the urban landscape he now traverses. Longfellow portrays the city as stifling—everything feels off, from the air to the ground. However, the stanza shifts in complexity: as the chief gazes at the city with contempt, Longfellow reminds us that millions of starving Europeans also assert their claim to this land. It’s a moment that appears to divert sympathy from the chief by referencing the struggles of immigrant masses, yet it comes across today as a justification for dispossession.
Back, then, back to thy woods in the regions west of the Wabash! / There as a monarch thou reignest.
Editor's note
Here, Longfellow shifts to a romanticized image of the chief's homeland — maple leaves resembling golden palace floors, air filled with the scent of pine, the thrill of the hunt, the flowing rivers. The language is rich and appreciative, portraying the chief as a 'hero' and 'tamer of horses' in his true environment. However, the beauty of this passage is overshadowed by what follows: this paradise is already in jeopardy. The stanza acts as an elegy disguised as a celebration, lamenting a world while still describing it as vibrant.
Hark! what murmurs arise from the heart of those mountainous deserts? / Is it the cry of the Foxes and Crows, or the mighty Behemoth,
Editor's note
The final stanza shifts away from the pastoral tone to deliver a stark warning. Longfellow identifies the real dangers approaching: the 'big thunder-canoe' (a steamboat on the Missouri River), wagon trains of settlers, and the unyielding westward migration of European colonizers. He references the biblical Behemoth — a symbol of immense destruction — but asserts that even this monster poses less danger than the settlers. The poem concludes with the image of wigwam smoke drifting steadily westward, a subtle yet powerful metaphor for a people being wiped out on their own land.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The driving cloud
- The chief's name and the poem's title, the driving cloud symbolizes the chief's identity and his people's fate — strong and apparent, yet ultimately unable to prevent its own scattering across the sky.
- Footprints
- Footprints, mentioned twice in the opening stanza, symbolize what remains after a people or species disappear. Longfellow likens the Omaha to extinct prehistoric birds, whose presence is known only through their fossil tracks — a stark representation of cultural and physical loss.
- The scarlet blanket
- The chief's blanket makes him stand out both visually and culturally in the city, yet it also represents his dignity and identity. It's the one item that remains distinct amidst the urban crowd surrounding him.
- The big thunder-canoe
- A steamboat on the Missouri River, this image captures the industrial-age expansion of settlers—mechanical, relentless, and uncaring about what it displaces. It stands as a stark symbol of the forces that are dismantling Indigenous life.
- Wigwam smoke
- In the closing lines, the smoke from wigwams drifting westward on the breath of 'Saxons and Celts' serves as a subtle metaphor for a community being driven from their land until there’s nowhere left to turn.
- Behemoth
- Behemoth, a creature of immense power from the Book of Job, is employed by Longfellow to illustrate that even the most fearsome natural force poses less threat to the Omaha than the influx of European settlers. This rhetorical escalation highlights the magnitude of the catastrophe they faced.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
Who is the poem actually talking to?
Longfellow is speaking to a genuine Omaha chief he likely met in person, possibly in a city like Washington, D.C., or Boston. The chief's name means something akin to 'driving cloud,' which inspired the poem's title. Longfellow addresses him directly throughout the piece, using 'thou' and 'thee,' creating the impression of a one-sided dialogue.
What does Longfellow mean by 'what will remain of thy race but the footprints'?
He compares the Omaha people to long-extinct prehistoric birds, known only through fossilized footprints. This grim prediction suggests that the Omaha, and Native Americans in general, may vanish so completely that only remnants of their existence will linger. It’s one of the most striking lines in the poem.
Why does Longfellow bring up starving Europeans in the second stanza?
When the chief gazes at the city with disdain and asserts his people's right to the land, Longfellow responds by highlighting the millions of impoverished Europeans who are equally yearning for land and opportunity. It's a complex argument—Longfellow appears to suggest that the chief's claim, though valid, can't stand against the overwhelming force of that human wave. Many contemporary readers see this as the most troubling aspect of the poem because it implicitly legitimizes dispossession.
Is Longfellow on the side of Native Americans or against them?
He feels sympathy, but it's shaped by the views of his era. He recognizes that westward expansion is harmful and grieves for what’s being lost. However, he views the chief more as a romantic character from a fading world than as a political equal, and he doesn’t challenge the idea of halting the expansion itself. His sympathy is genuine, yet it comes across as paternalistic.
What is the 'big thunder-canoe'?
It’s a steamboat on the Missouri River. By the 1840s, these vessels were venturing deeper into the continent, transporting settlers and soldiers. Longfellow paints a vivid picture of a boat "breasting the merciless current," symbolizing the relentless drive of industrial-age expansion.
What is Behemoth doing in this poem?
Behemoth, mentioned in the Book of Job in the Bible, is a creature of immense, almost otherworldly strength. Longfellow uses it as a reference point: even a fearsome creature like Behemoth poses less of a threat to the Omaha than the influx of European settlers. This serves as a rhetorical device to emphasize just how overwhelming the danger truly is.
What meter or form does the poem use?
The poem is crafted in dactylic hexameter — the same meter found in ancient Greek and Latin epic poetry, and the same meter Longfellow later employed in The Song of Hiawatha. Each line follows a long-short-short rhythmic pattern that creates a flowing, chant-like quality. Longfellow chose this meter intentionally to lend the subject an epic, timeless significance.
Why does Longfellow tell the chief to go back west if he knows the west is also being taken over?
That tension lies at the emotional heart of the poem. In the third stanza, the chief is urged to return to his homeland, depicted as a paradise. However, the fourth stanza quickly unveils that this homeland is already under siege from settlers and their wagon trains. The advice to 'go back' feels empty before it's even fully stated. Longfellow appears to recognize this, as the poem concludes not with a resolution but with a haunting image of smoke drifting westward into oblivion.
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "To the Driving Cloud." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/to-the-driving-cloud-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). To the driving cloud. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/to-the-driving-cloud-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'To the Driving Cloud,' Longfellow constructs an apostrophe with an inherent ideological contradiction: the poem mourns the displacement of the Omaha chief while simultaneously commanding that displacement to persist. This tension …
- Row B — Evidence + Commentary4 pts
- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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