The Annotated Edition
The Witch of Atlas by Percy Bysshe Shelley
The Witch of Atlas is Shelley’s whimsical and captivating tale about a magical woman born on a mountain in North Africa.
- Core theme
- Beauty
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Stanza by stanza, with notes
How, my dear Mary,--are you critic-bitten / (For vipers kill, though dead) by some review,
Editor's note
The poem begins with a dedication to Mary Shelley, who had reportedly expressed that the poem lacked human interest. Shelley pokes fun at her for letting critics influence her — dead vipers still have venom, suggesting that a negative review can taint a reader's perspective long after it's been penned. He urges her to embrace a poem that doesn’t follow a traditional narrative, likening it to a kitten playing before its claws have developed.
What hand would crush the silken-winged fly, / The youngest of inconstant April's minions,
Editor's note
Shelley defends his poem by likening it to a delicate spring fly. No one would squash such a fragile, lovely creature just because it can't fly as high as a swan. He acknowledges that the poem is small and fleeting, but that shouldn't warrant its destruction. The fly is destined to perish as day turns to night — much like the poem may eventually fade — but it deserves to experience its short existence.
To thy fair feet a winged Vision came, / Whose date should have been longer than a day,
Editor's note
Shelley takes on a more personal and somber tone as he reflects on a 'winged Vision' — a past poem or creative thought — that once inspired Mary but soon faded away, much like a rainbow that briefly appears in the evening sky before the rain washes it away. He humorously critiques his own fleeting creativity, joking that none of his writings are worthy of lasting beyond their moment.
Wordsworth informs us he was nineteen years / Considering and retouching Peter Bell;
Editor's note
Here, Shelley delivers a biting critique of Wordsworth, who famously spent nineteen years working on his poem *Peter Bell*. Shelley suggests that all that painstaking effort led to something excessive and lacking foundation — a tree with roots that stretch to Hell and branches that obscure Heaven. The irony is that Heaven and Earth ultimately work together to undermine the overly meticulous poet's efforts.
My Witch indeed is not so sweet a creature / As Ruth or Lucy, whom his graceful praise
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Shelley directly likens his Witch to Wordsworth's cherished characters, Ruth and Lucy. He admits that his Witch lacks their domestic sweetness, but notes she was crafted in just three days, compared to the nineteen years Wordsworth took. He pokes fun at *Peter Bell*, describing it as a scarecrow in tattered clothes (a nod to King Lear), while he suggests that his own Witch, if revealed, would be so stunning it might verge on idolatry.
If you strip Peter, you will see a fellow / Scorched by Hell's hyperequatorial climate
Editor's note
The satirical critique of Wordsworth culminates in this moment. Shelley envisions peeling back the poetic layers of *Peter Bell* to reveal a charred, sulfurous figure resembling a scarecrow — a Scaramouch in form, Othello in hue. In contrast, revealing the Witch would be such a profound experience that it would demand forgiveness from a priest — not due to any sin, but because her beauty transforms into an object of reverence.
Before those cruel Twins, whom at one birth / Incestuous Change bore to her father Time,
Editor's note
The main poem begins. Shelley creates a mythological backdrop, where Error and Truth — the twin offspring of Change and Time — have chased away the vibrant, magical beings that once roamed the earth. The Witch resides in this earlier, more vibrant world, dwelling in a cave on Mount Atlas next to a hidden spring. This setup intentionally positions the poem beyond the realm of realism.
Her mother was one of the Atlantides: / The all-beholding Sun had ne'er beholden
Editor's note
The Witch's origin story unfolds: her mother was a daughter of Atlas, and the Sun fell in love with her, showering her with kisses of light until she transformed into pure radiance. This death-by-beauty is a form of divine annihilation — she turns into vapor, then cloud, then meteor, ultimately becoming a hidden star nestled between Earth and Mars. The Witch is truly born from sunlight and myth.
Ten times the Mother of the Months had bent / Her bow beside the folding-star,
Editor's note
Ten lunar months pass — the length of a pregnancy — and then the Witch takes form in the cave. Shelley depicts her birth as a gradual emergence of warmth and light in a cold, damp space. The moon controls the tides like a mother admonishing her children, and the cave slowly becomes infused with the Witch's vibrant presence.
A lovely lady garmented in light / From her own beauty--deep her eyes, as are
Editor's note
The Witch's appearance is depicted with an intensity that goes beyond typical beauty. Her eyes resemble gateways to an endless night, glimpsed through a shattered temple roof — expansive, dark, and sacred. She has dark hair, her voice resonates with the essence of love, and all living things are irresistibly attracted to her. Shelley's portrayal is intentionally overwhelming; he notes that just imagining her can make one's mind spin.
And first the spotted cameleopard came, / And then the wise and fearless elephant;
Editor's note
A parade of animals gathers at the Witch's fountain: a giraffe, an elephant, a serpent, and lions. Her presence calms them all. The lioness brings her cubs to learn to let go of their instinct to kill, while the leopard relaxes at her feet. This embodies the classical motif of *orphic* power — the belief that genuine beauty or music can soothe untamed nature — but Shelley infuses it with a distinctly feminine, peaceful energy.
And old Silenus, shaking a green stick / Of lilies, and the wood-gods in a crew
Editor's note
The mythological figures arrive next: Silenus, who was Dionysus's old tutor, along with Faunus, Dryope, and other woodland spirits, come buzzing and intoxicated by the noon heat, much like cicadas. They discover the Witch sitting on an emerald throne. Even Pan—the universal spirit of wild nature—travels through the mountains to sense her presence, although he stays hidden from view.
And every nymph of stream and spreading tree, / And every shepherdess of Ocean's flocks,
Editor's note
The gathering grows to include ocean nymphs, river gods, Priapus, herdsmen, mountain maidens, and a wild array of mythological and fantastical beings — Pygmies, Cyclopes, Centaurs, Satyrs, and even stranger creatures with dog heads and bird feet. All are captivated by the Witch's beauty, which silences both their awe and their mockery.
For she was beautiful--her beauty made / The bright world dim, and everything beside
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Shelley halts the procession to express the Witch's power clearly: her beauty renders the rest of the world a mere shadow. Anyone who has gazed upon her can't focus on anything else. This beauty acts like a cognitive takeover — it's not just about aesthetic enjoyment; it’s a complete immersion.
Which when the lady knew, she took her spindle / And twined three threads of fleecy mist,
Editor's note
Knowing her beauty can be overwhelming, the Witch weaves a veil from mist, light, and starbeams—a shadow that softens the blinding force of her own radiance. This is a kind and considerate gesture: she dims her glow so others can be at ease around her. The veil also represents her creativity, connecting her to the poet who must shape their vision into form.
The deep recesses of her odorous dwelling / Were stored with magic treasures--sounds of air,
Editor's note
The cave's interior resembles a magical library and a sensory archive. It contains sounds that draw in spirits, visions wrapped in chrysalis-like sheaths ready to emerge, scents trapped like birds in a net, and healing liquids that can transform death into beautiful dreams. Essentially, the cave serves as a storehouse for art and imagination — every object within it embodies a type of creative or transformative power.
Her cave was stored with scrolls of strange device, / The works of some Saturnian Archimage,
Editor's note
The scrolls in the cave hold the wisdom of a forgotten golden age — revealing how to reclaim humanity's lost innocence, how to satisfy the destructive cravings for gold and violence, and how to create a human existence as harmonious as the stars. Other scrolls share the profound secrets of love. Shelley presents this knowledge as both idealistic and perilous — the unworthy are cautioned not to inquire about the contents of the love-scrolls.
At first she lived alone in this wild home, / And her own thoughts were each a minister,
Editor's note
The Witch's solitude is portrayed as both self-sufficient and imaginative. Her thoughts take form in ocean foam, wind, and fire, executing her desires. Her father, the Sun, has granted her thoughts the ability to reach any place his light touches. This reflects Shelley's vision of the perfect poet or philosopher: a mind so vibrant that it creates its own universe.
The Ocean-nymphs and Hamadryades, / Oreads and Naiads, with long weedy locks,
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The nature spirits — sea nymphs, tree nymphs, mountain nymphs, river nymphs — ask to serve the Witch forever in return for basking in her light. She declines, kindly but firmly, pointing out that they are all mortal in the end: fountains dry up, oaks fall, and even the ocean will eventually evaporate. She cannot love beings whose existence is fleeting when she herself is eternal.
'And ye with them will perish, one by one;-- / If I must sigh to think that this shall be,
Editor's note
The Witch's refusal stands out as one of the poem's most touching moments. She cries at the thought of their eventual deaths, yet she can't allow herself to bond with beings so much more mortal than she is. Her immortality doesn't feel like a victory here — it feels more like a form of exile. She bids them farewell, and the weeping voices of the departing spirits resonate through the streams and forests.
All day the wizard lady sate aloof, / Spelling out scrolls of dread antiquity,
Editor's note
After the spirits leave, the Witch returns to her solitary life: reading ancient scrolls, embroidering tapestries of poetic tales that come alive with the colors of her smiles, tending a fire of sandalwood and rare gums. Shelley adds a charming note — 'Men scarcely know how beautiful fire is' — before mentioning that the Witch hardly notices the fire because the cloth she weaves shines even brighter.
This lady never slept, but lay in trance / All night within the fountain--as in sleep.
Editor's note
The Witch doesn’t sleep; she lies in a trance within the fountain, observing the constellations twirl through the water. In winter, she withdraws to a well of crimson fire amid a meadow of asphodel, resting in it as snow melts around her. Her existence hovers between states — neither fully asleep nor awake, neither entirely mortal nor completely divine.
She had a boat, which some say Vulcan wrought / For Venus, as the chariot of her star;
Editor's note
The Witch gets her hands on a magical boat with a legendary background: crafted by Vulcan for Venus, then sold to Apollo, and finally given to the Witch. Another version of the story claims that the first-born Love, Eros, took a seed from Chaos, planted it in Venus's star, and nurtured the plant whose gourd-like fruit formed the boat's hull. Both tales highlight that the boat is made from love and cosmic elements — it originates from a realm beyond the laws of ordinary physics.
Then by strange art she kneaded fire and snow / Together, tempering the repugnant mass
Editor's note
The Witch creates a companion: a living figure made from fire and snow, held together by liquid love. This results in Hermaphroditus — a being without a fixed sex, embodying the grace of both male and female, physically perfect and radiantly pure. Rather than a character, this figure serves as an embodiment of a Shelleyan ideal: beauty and power liberated from the constraints of gender.
From its smooth shoulders hung two rapid wings, / Fit to have borne it to the seventh sphere,
Editor's note
Hermaphroditus receives wings that shimmer like lightning and are painted in the hues of the sky. The Witch positions it at the front of the boat, taking the rudder for herself. They embark on a journey down the mountain streams, navigating through forests filled with panthers, icy cliffs, and dark caverns — a quest that is as much about the physical journey as it is about inner exploration.
And ever as she went, the Image lay / With folded wings and unawakened eyes;
Editor's note
As the boat moves along, Hermaphroditus drifts in a dream-like state, its face animated with a flurry of emotions—smiles, tears, sighs—while the world outside flows past. This contrast between the dreaming figure and the vibrant landscape reflects the poem's tension between inner imagination and external reality.
And ever down the prone vale, like a cloud / Upon a stream of wind, the pinnace went:
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The journey takes us through pools, rapids, and cataracts. The boat glides effortlessly—no ordinary vessel could handle these waters. Shelley vividly depicts the waterfalls and underground rivers, capturing their raw energy as the boat is carried by misty rainbows through shadowy passages and into the open sky.
And when the wizard lady would ascend / The labyrinths of some many-winding vale,
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When the boat needs to go upstream or upward, the Witch calls out 'Hermaphroditus!' and the figure awakens, spreads its wings, and lifts the boat into the air. The way the wings catch the light — flecked with fire, trailing snow and moonlight — stands out as one of the poem's most visually stunning moments.
Or, when the weary moon was in the wane, / Or in the noon of interlunar night,
Editor's note
During the dark of the moon, when her visions fade, the Witch flies south to the Antarctic, landing by a vast still lake beneath the southern constellations. Here, she creates a temporary haven from storm clouds, a jewel-like shelter while the outer lake rages. She plays in her boat like a tiger chasing antelopes, circling the reflection of a shooting star on the water.
And then she called out of the hollow turrets / Of those high clouds, white, golden and vermilion,
Editor's note
The Witch calls forth her spirit armies from the clouds—millions of them, waving meteor-flags and assembling pavilions made of the very atmosphere. They create a tent of exhalations illuminated by lightning, lay a carpet of mist across the water, and place her upon a throne of starlight. She receives updates about everything that has transpired between Earth and the Moon, responding with both laughter and tears.
These were tame pleasures; she would often climb / The steepest ladder of the crudded rack
Editor's note
Even the grand aerial court is referred to as 'tame pleasures.' The Witch's more adventurous activities involve riding storm-clouds like Arion riding a dolphin, chasing after lightning bolts, running on wind-platforms, and soaring to the upper currents of air that circle the earth. When she joins the chorus of those elevated spirits, mortals below enjoy clear skies and brief moments of joy.
But her choice sport was, in the hours of sleep, / To glide adown old Nilus,
Editor's note
The Witch loves to glide down the Nile at night while people are asleep, passing through Egypt and Ethiopia, taking in the temples, pyramids, and canals. She glides through the landscape like a spirit of slumber, slipping into palaces, labyrinths, and underground streets, observing mortals in all their states of rest.
A pleasure sweet doubtless it was to see / Mortals subdued in all the shapes of sleep.
Editor's note
Shelley lists the sleeping humans that the Witch watches: infant twins, a crying young man, lovers wrapped in each other's arms, and peaceful elderly folks. Yet, she also perceives a more unsettling sleep — twisted nightmares, the signs of societal expectations and repression etched into people's expressions. She refers to this as 'the strife which stirs the liquid surface of man's life' — the social and psychological unrest simmering just below the surface of everyday life.
And little did the sight disturb her soul.-- / We, the weak mariners of that wide lake
Editor's note
Shelley takes on the role of narrator to highlight the Witch's tranquility against the backdrop of human uncertainty. We are like 'weak mariners' on a vast lake, sailing aimlessly without guidance toward an uncertain destination. The Witch moves through the serene depths beneath the chaotic surface, where eternal beings exist in peace. This illustrates Shelley's vision of the philosophical or poetic mind that perceives what lies below the turmoil of society.
And she saw princes couched under the glow / Of sunlike gems;
Editor's note
The Witch watches over every social class as they sleep: princes, priests (who are all trained to be the same, as Shelley points out with a touch of dry humor), peasants, sailors, and the deceased in their graves. She peers beyond the physical forms to the souls within — the 'naked beauty' of each spirit — and possesses a charm that allows a spirit to blend with her own.
Alas! Aurora, what wouldst thou have given / For such a charm when Tithon became gray?
Editor's note
Shelley brings up three mythological figures — Aurora (who cherished the aging Tithonus), Venus (who mourned Adonis), and the Heliads — to ponder what they might have sacrificed for the Witch's charm. This charm seems capable of reversing aging or death, or at least providing comfort in the wake of losing someone dear. The Heliads (the daughters of the Sun) are not yet aware of its worth — suggesting that the Witch's power remains unappreciated.
'Tis said in after times her spirit free / Knew what love was, and felt itself alone--
Editor's note
A brief, touching aside: in later times, the Witch came to understand love and felt lonely. But she stayed chaste — 'like a sexless bee / Tasting all blossoms, and confined to none' — moving among human forms with a calm gaze and a light heart. This captures Shelley's idea of a love that is universal and non-possessive, rather than exclusive and consuming.
To those she saw most beautiful, she gave / Strange panacea in a crystal bowl:--
Editor's note
The Witch offers her gifts to the most beautiful sleepers: a healing drink that changes their lives, allowing them to experience existence as if influenced by something beyond the ordinary. When they pass away, their graves turn into glowing sanctuaries. She also undoes the embalming process, removes the burial cloths, and leaves the body in a suspended, dreamlike state—neither dead nor alive, at peace for eternity.
And she would write strange dreams upon the brain / Of those who were less beautiful,
Editor's note
For those who are less beautiful — the morally compromised — the Witch creates corrective dreams. Misers hand over their treasures to beggars. Deceitful scribes reveal their own dishonesty. Priests craft honest explanations of their rituals, confessing that the sacred bull Apis is simply a bull. Kings adorn apes with their crowns and observe their courtiers bowing to them. Soldiers envision themselves as blacksmiths, turning their swords into ploughshares. These are Shelley’s political fantasies transformed into dream-comedy.
And timid lovers who had been so coy, / They hardly knew whether they loved or not,
Editor's note
The Witch lends a hand to bashful lovers by sending them dreams where they express their feelings. This way, when they meet the following day, they share a knowing blush. She also makes sure that their relationship leads to a joyful marriage. Additionally, she brings back friends who have been separated by jealousy. The poem concludes with Shelley vowing to share another story about what the Witch did to gods and spirits, noting that this tale is more fitting for winter nights than summer days.
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The Witch herself
- She represents Shelley's vision of poetic imagination or ideal beauty—a force that transcends ordinary human time and society, able to see beyond appearances to reveal inner truths, and that changes the world not through power, but through vision and dreams.
- The cave and its treasures
- The cave represents the artist's mind: a personal, inner space filled with sounds, images, scents, and scrolls — all kinds of creative and intellectual energy just waiting to be unleashed into the world.
- Hermaphroditus
- The genderless companion, created from fire and snow, embodies an ideal of beauty and love that transcends the constraints of gender and social roles—a vision reminiscent of Shelley’s ideas about what humans could evolve into if love were genuinely universal.
- The boat
- The magical boat, crafted from love and bestowed by the gods, serves as a vehicle for the imagination. It can journey anywhere, break the rules of physics, and transport its passenger between the earthly realm and the divine.
- The veil
- The veil that the Witch weaves from mist and starlight to temper her own brightness represents poetic form itself — it's the essential bridge between an overwhelming vision and the human audience that needs to absorb it without being overwhelmed.
- The dreams she plants
- The corrective dreams the Witch weaves into the minds of the sleeping — turning misers into the generous, priests into the honest, and soldiers into the peaceful — serve as Shelley’s symbol for the political power of poetry and imagination: the belief that art can transform human consciousness from within.
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