The Annotated Edition
See Exodus XXIV, 29-35. by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This brief poem by Longfellow functions as an epigraph — a passage taken from an actual petition that Acadian exiles sent to the British king following their forced removal from Nova Scotia in 1755.
- Themes
- exile, family, justice
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Parents were separated from children and husbands from wives, some of whom have not to this day met again;
Editor's note
The petition begins by highlighting the most personal losses — families ripped apart. The phrase "have not to this day met again" hits hard, capturing the voice of survivors still in the dark about their loved ones' fates. There's no embellishment here, just a stark reality that stings more than any metaphor could convey.
and we were so crowded in the transport vessels that we had not even room to lay down,
Editor's note
The focus on the physical conditions aboard the deportation ships brings the suffering into the body. Being unable to lie down takes away a fundamental aspect of human dignity from the Acadians. This detail is vivid enough to seem like firsthand testimony, and indeed, it is.
and consequently were prevented from carrying with us proper necessaries, especially for the support and comfort of the aged and weak,
Editor's note
The bureaucratic language of "proper necessaries" makes the cruelty seem more like a part of the system than an accident. The Acadians aren't just talking about hardship in general; they're showing how a system let down the most vulnerable people in their community.
many of whom quickly ended their lives. PETITION OF THE ACADIANS TO THE KING.
Editor's note
The final clause hits hard with its straightforward message: the elderly and weak died. The title — "PETITION OF THE ACADIANS TO THE KING" — serves as a stark reminder that this is an actual document directed at the very authority responsible for the pain. Longfellow allows the history to resonate on its own, which aligns perfectly with the biblical title: this testimony, much like Moses's face, radiates a light that can't be obscured.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The transport vessels
- The ships aren't merely a historical detail; they represent the entire system of forced displacement. Being denied the space to lie down on them illustrates just how thoroughly the Acadians were stripped of their agency and dignity.
- The aged and weak
- This group serves as a moral gauge for the cruelty of deportation. In many ethical and religious traditions, the way a society treats its most vulnerable members reflects its true character. Their deaths stand as a condemnation of the policy that led to them.
- The Petition itself
- The act of petitioning the king—appealing to the authority behind their exile—represents the Acadians' powerlessness and their determination to be heard. It stands as a gesture of dignity against the backdrop of erasure.
- The biblical title (Exodus XXIV, 29-35)
- The passage notes that Moses came down from Sinai with a face shining from his encounter with God, leading him to wear a veil. By linking this reference to the Acadian petition, Longfellow implies that this document holds a similarly sacred truth — a light that must be recognized.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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