The Annotated Edition
RICHARD HENRY DANA by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Longfellow offers a brief yet impactful tribute to Richard Henry Dana Sr., a fellow poet and critic, capturing the moment of his burial on a snowy day.
- Themes
- death, faith, memory
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
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In the old churchyard of his native town, / And in the ancestral tomb beside the wall,
Editor's note
Longfellow begins by placing us in a tangible, real location — the churchyard where Dana's family has been buried for generations. The term "ancestral" indicates that Dana is being brought back to his roots, resting among his own kin. There’s a sense of quiet dignity in this setting: it’s where he truly belongs.
We laid him in the sleep that comes to all, / And left him to his rest and his renown.
Editor's note
Death is often described as "the sleep that comes to all" — a soothing, universal expression that softens the harshness of loss. The phrase "rest and his renown" fits together nicely: the body may rest, but the legacy endures. Longfellow distinguishes the man's physical demise from his enduring impact.
The snow was falling, as if Heaven dropped down / White flowers of Paradise to strew his pall;--
Editor's note
Here, the poem takes flight. The falling snow transforms into white flowers from Paradise, gently scattered over Dana's coffin cloth (the "pall"). It's a striking and beautiful image: nature itself is conducting the funeral rite, with Heaven joining in the burial.
The dead around him seemed to wake, and call / His name, as worthy of so white a crown.
Editor's note
The other souls resting in the churchyard appear to awaken and acknowledge Dana as one of their own — someone deserving of the snowy, white crown that nature has draped over the scene. This white crown reflects both the snow and the classic notion of a martyr's or saint's crown, lifting Dana up without being overly dramatic about it.
And now the moon is shining on the scene, / And the broad sheet of snow is written o'er
Editor's note
The sestet moves forward in time — from the burial to a later, more tranquil moment when the mourners have left and moonlight illuminates the snow. Longfellow refers to the snow as a "broad sheet" that has been "written o'er," establishing the main metaphor of the closing lines: the landscape as a sacred text.
With shadows cruciform of leafless trees, / As once the winding-sheet of Saladin
Editor's note
The cross-shaped ("cruciform") shadows of bare winter trees cast across the snow resemble the winding-sheet of Saladin—the renowned Muslim sultan—said to be inscribed with verses from the Koran as a declaration of faith. Longfellow connects two distinct religious traditions, each using written symbols to pay tribute to the deceased.
With chapters of the Koran; but, ah! more / Mysterious and triumphant signs are these.
Editor's note
The poem ends by asserting that the natural signs — shadows of trees illuminated by moonlight on snow — hold a deeper mystery and triumph than the Koran written on Saladin's shroud. This is a bold statement: the language of nature at this graveside transcends any human scripture. The exclamation "ah!" serves as the sole moment of genuine emotion in an otherwise controlled poem, and it resonates powerfully.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Falling snow
- The snow serves as a natural occurrence and a divine sign—white flowers from Paradise sprinkled over Dana's coffin. It symbolizes purity, honor, and the notion that Heaven is paying its respects.
- White crown
- The crown of snow brings to mind a martyr's or saint's crown, as well as the quiet dignity of a life well lived. It signifies that Dana is seen as worthy, not just by those who mourn him, but also by the dead surrounding him.
- Cruciform shadows
- The cross-shaped shadows of leafless trees etched on the snow create a natural scripture—a sacred text made by moonlight and winter. They express the notion that nature communicates a spiritual language that goes deeper than any human writing.
- Saladin's winding-sheet
- The historical detail of Saladin's burial shroud, which is inscribed with Koranic verses, highlights death as a moment of deep faith and declaration. Longfellow uses this as a comparison to suggest that the natural signs at Dana's grave carry even greater significance.
- The ancestral tomb
- The family tomb next to the churchyard wall grounds Dana in continuity — connecting him to his lineage, community, and place. It suggests that his death isn’t an ending but a return.
§06Historical context
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