The Annotated Edition
PICTURE-WRITING by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This is Canto XV of Longfellow's epic poem *The Song of Hiawatha*, which narrates the tale of how the famed Ojibwe leader Hiawatha created picture-writing.
- Themes
- art, death, identity
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
In those days said Hiawatha, / "Lo! how all things fade and perish!"
Editor's note
Hiawatha begins with a heartfelt lament. He enumerates all that is fading — the exploits of warriors, tales of hunters, the foresight of the Jossakeeds (prophets), and the skills of the Wabenos (shamans). The repeated phrase "All the..." emphasizes the extent of this loss. Nothing remains to be preserved.
"Great men die and are forgotten, / Wise men speak; their words of wisdom"
Editor's note
Hiawatha highlights a crucial issue: spoken wisdom vanishes with the speaker. Words that resonate with one generation often fail to reach the next, which is portrayed as waiting "in the great, mysterious darkness / Of the speechless days that shall be." The term — speechless days — is powerful; the future remains quiet because the present lacks a means to communicate with it.
"On the grave-posts of our fathers / Are no signs, no figures painted;"
Editor's note
He turns to a stark and painful example: the grave posts of ancestors bear no markings. The living recognize the dead as their fathers, but that's all — they have no clan, no totem, no name. The lack of a writing system has erased their identities.
"Face to face we speak together, / But we cannot speak when absent,"
Editor's note
The fourth issue Hiawatha points out is distance communication. Without writing, messages delivered by a messenger can be misinterpreted or distorted. Once spoken, the word becomes delicate as soon as it leaves the speaker's presence.
Thus said Hiawatha, walking / In the solitary forest,
Editor's note
The poem transitions from words to deeds. Hiawatha finds himself alone in the forest, reflecting on the well-being of his people. He pulls out his paints and starts to work on a birch tree. This solitude matters — creativity flourishes in the stillness, away from the hustle and bustle.
Gitche Manito the Mighty, / He, the Master of Life, was painted
Editor's note
Now we get the symbols themselves, explained one by one. The Great Spirit is represented by an egg with four projecting points—spanning everywhere, in all directions. The Evil Spirit takes the form of a serpent. Life is depicted as a white circle, while Death is a darker one. Longfellow essentially offers the reader a guided tour of Indigenous visual vocabulary, treating each symbol with the same importance a scholar might give to Egyptian hieroglyphs.
For the earth he drew a straight line, / For the sky a bow above it;
Editor's note
This stanza lists the cosmic symbols: earth represented by a straight line, sky by an arc, daytime as empty white space, and night filled with stars. Sunrise and sunset are depicted as points on the left and right, while rain appears as wavy descending lines. The system is both elegant and logical — creating a comprehensive picture of the natural world through these marks.
Footprints pointing towards a wigwam / Were a sign of invitation,
Editor's note
Hiawatha connects with social symbols. Footprints leading to a wigwam signal that guests are arriving. Bloodied upraised hands represent destruction and hostility. These signs are practical and part of everyday life — the writing system isn't just for priests and prophets; it's meant for everyone.
All these things did Hiawatha / Show unto his wondering people,
Editor's note
Hiawatha shows the system to his people and tells them directly: go paint your grave-posts with your household totem. The word "wondering" reflects how the community feels — they are witnessing something truly new. The issue with the grave-posts mentioned at the beginning is now being addressed.
And they painted on the grave-posts / On the graves yet unforgotten,
Editor's note
The people respond to Hiawatha's teachings right away. Each clan paints its totem — Bear, Reindeer, Turtle, Crane, Beaver — upside down to indicate that the owner has passed away. This detail about the inversion is both precise and respectful; Longfellow highlights a genuine tradition of Ojibwe grave-marking.
And the Jossakeeds, the Prophets, / The Wabenos, the Magicians,
Editor's note
The community's religious and magical specialists adapt the system to suit their needs, painting symbols for their chants and songs on bark and deerskin. These figures are referred to as "mystical and awful" — meant to inspire awe rather than fear. Here, the imagery becomes wilder and more visionary, featuring the Great Spirit, a serpent, an eclipsed moon, headless men, and war captains.
Nor forgotten was the Love-Song, / The most subtle of all medicines,
Editor's note
The poem's final and longest symbol-sequence is the love song, which Longfellow describes as "more dangerous than war or hunting." This marks a tonal shift — it feels playful, tender, and even a bit amused. The love song is decoded symbol by symbol: the scarlet lover, the singing figure, the shared wigwam, the clasped hands, the maiden on an island, the sleeping girl, and finally a heart within a magic circle. It becomes clear that love is the most complex concept the new writing system has to convey.
Thus it was that Hiawatha, / In his wisdom, taught the people
Editor's note
The closing lines provide a straightforward summary and list of surfaces: birch bark, reindeer skin, grave-posts. The way these materials keep appearing in the canto has given them a sacred quality. Hiawatha's gift goes beyond practicality — it embodies the essence of memory itself.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The egg with four projecting points (Gitche Manito)
- The Great Spirit, depicted as an egg radiating in all directions, symbolizes omnipresence — the divine exists everywhere simultaneously. It also represents origin and potential, as an egg holds life within it before it becomes visible.
- The serpent (Mitche Manito / Kenabeek)
- The great serpent represents the Spirit of Evil — sly and slithering, always gazing toward heaven as if plotting against it. While the serpent is a widely recognized symbol of evil, in this context, it is rooted in the unique traditions of the Ojibwe people.
- The inverted totem on the grave-post
- A clan totem painted upside-down indicates that the individual associated with that symbol has passed away. This inversion transforms a sign of life into a symbol of death — the same image, reversed, conveys a completely different meaning.
- The white circle (Life) and darkened circle (Death)
- Life and Death as two overlapping circles — one bright, one dark — imply that they share the same shape and form, differing only in light. This is a subtly profound visual concept: death isn’t the absence of life; it’s more like a shadow.
- The scarlet figure of the lover
- In the love-song sequence, the lover is depicted in a vivid scarlet — a color that embodies passion, visibility, and strength. Here, red signifies not danger but intensity; the lover is a presence that demands attention.
- The heart within a magic circle
- The last symbol of the love song — a heart inside a drawn circle — signifies complete intimacy and vulnerability. The magic circle marks a boundary that has been crossed; the beloved's deepest self is now open to the lover's voice.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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