One of the Men
That makes the wonder greater.
That's Witchcraft. Why, if they had teeth like yours,
'T would be no wonder if the girls were bitten!
The Annotated Edition
One of the Men by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
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This comic fragment is short and punchy, featuring a speaker who can't help but admire someone's impressive teeth.
- Core theme
- Beauty
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
This comic fragment is short and punchy, featuring a speaker who can't help but admire someone's impressive teeth. They joke that if the girls had teeth like his, it wouldn't be surprising if they bit. It's a clever bit of banter—a sharp, teasing compliment that turns flattery into a playful jab. Overall, it feels like a lighthearted, slightly absurd conversation about charm and attraction.
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
That makes the wonder greater. / That's Witchcraft.
Editor's note
The speaker is reacting to a comment made right before this part starts — we find ourselves in the middle of a conversation. Whatever was just shared has *heightened* the speaker's wonder instead of clarifying it. Referring to it as "Witchcraft" is playful: the speaker is suggesting that the charm or allure being discussed is so strong that it goes beyond typical understanding.
Why, if they had teeth like yours, / 'T would be no wonder if the girls were bitten!
Editor's note
Here the joke lands. The speaker turns to the person being addressed and says: your teeth are so impressive (so dazzling, so sharp, so attractive) that if the girls had teeth like that, they would definitely bite — and naturally, men would find themselves bitten. It turns the compliment into a humorous take on seduction and danger, playing with the double meaning of being "bitten" by attraction.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
The tone is playful, teasing, and casual—this is wit that exists simply for the fun of it. It has a theatrical flair, reminiscent of a line delivered with a knowing smirk at a dinner table. There’s no real malice here, just the enjoyment of a cleverly crafted joke.
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Teeth
- Teeth symbolize charm, attractiveness, and a hint of danger. They’re striking in appearance and also serve as a metaphor for the ability to captivate or even hurt someone.
- Witchcraft
- Used in a humorous context to highlight an irresistible personal quality. The speaker doesn't mean it literally — it's a funny way of expressing that the displayed appeal is so powerful it defies rational explanation.
- Being bitten
- A double image: what teeth do in a literal sense and what attraction does in a figurative sense — it grabs your attention, it can hurt, and it leaves a lasting impression. The idea of being "bitten" by love or desire is a classic metaphor, and Longfellow uses it humorously in this context.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- blank verse
§07Historical context
Historical context
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow (1807–1882) was among the most popular American poets of the nineteenth century, celebrated for his long narrative poems like *Evangeline* and *The Song of Hiawatha*. He also crafted shorter occasional pieces, comic verses, and dramatic fragments—demonstrating his versatility beyond just grand and somber themes. "One of the Men" seems to be a dramatic fragment or perhaps a light verse, potentially a line taken from a larger theatrical or narrative work. The snippet we have acts like a punchline: we catch the tail end of a conversation, and its humor relies on the rhythm of spoken dialogue. This type of clever, social verse was in vogue during Longfellow's time when poetry was often recited aloud in parlors and at gatherings, making a well-timed comic line just as cherished as a heartfelt lyric.
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is this poem actually about?
It's a comic fragment — just a few lines of playful banter where one speaker praises another's teeth so lavishly that it turns into a joke: if the girls had teeth like that, it's no surprise they'd bite (and no wonder men would be drawn to them). It's a fun twist on the themes of attraction and charm.
Why is it so short? Is this the whole poem?
Almost certainly not. This feels like a snippet from a longer dramatic or narrative piece — we're thrown into the middle of a conversation. The opening line ("That makes the wonder greater") clearly responds to something mentioned earlier, which we lack context for. Consider it a surviving fragment of a larger work.
What does 'Witchcraft' mean here?
It's not meant to be taken literally. The speaker is jokingly using "Witchcraft" to describe the charm or quality this person possesses, suggesting it's so strong that normal explanations just don't cut it. It's an exaggerated comic expression, not a claim about the supernatural.
What does 'the girls were bitten' mean?
It operates on two levels. On a literal level, teeth bite — so if the girls had teeth like the person being addressed, they'd bite. However, "bitten" can also refer to being struck by love or desire (we still say someone is "bitten" by something when they're really into it). Longfellow cleverly uses both meanings simultaneously for comic effect.
Is this poem typical of Longfellow's style?
Not his most famous style, no. Longfellow is best known for his lengthy, serious narrative poems. However, he also created lighter, witty pieces and dramatic verse, and this fragment reflects that lesser-known aspect of his work — it’s quick, conversational, and designed for performance or reading aloud.
Who is the speaker talking to?
We can't say for sure, as this is just a fragment. The speaker seems to be talking to someone — a man, referred to as "One of the Men" — who has notably impressive teeth. The tone gives off a vibe of friends or acquaintances in a relaxed atmosphere, exchanging compliments and jokes.
What themes does this poem deal with?
At its core, it's about beauty and attraction—specifically the physical charm that draws people in. There's also a thread of identity woven through it: the joke relies on what makes this person uniquely compelling compared to others.
Citation
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "One of the Men." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/one-of-the-men-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). One of the men. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/one-of-the-men-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
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