The Annotated Edition
OLYMPUS. by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This is a dramatic monologue delivered by Hermes, the messenger god, as he puts on his winged sandals and gets ready to fly down to Earth on a mission from Zeus.
- Themes
- art, freedom, identity
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
HERMES (putting on his sandals.) / Much must he toil who serves the Immortal Gods,
Editor's note
Hermes starts with a mild grumble — being the gods' errand-boy is tiring work. He can barely take off his winged sandals before he has to put them back on again. This relatable, almost funny complaint instantly makes this ancient god seem more human and accessible.
But to-day / The errand is not foolish.
Editor's note
Here, Hermes pauses his complaint and acknowledges that he actually enjoys today's mission. This change in tone hints that something intriguing is going on — Zeus has tasked him with a matchmaking job that involves Prometheus, the well-known Titan who stole fire.
That my caduceus in the whistling air / Shall make a sound like the Pandaean pipes,
Editor's note
Hermes envisions soaring through the sky at such incredible speeds that his staff, the caduceus, hums in the air like Pan's pipes, tricking the shepherds below into believing they hear music. This delightful mythological twist is clever: Hermes invented the lyre and is linked to music, making this image a perfect fit.
Commissioned by high-thundering Zeus, to lead / A maiden to Prometheus, in his tower,
Editor's note
The mission is clear: Zeus has tasked Hermes with delivering a woman to Prometheus and using his charm to persuade the Titan to marry her. Longfellow references the myth of Pandora (or a version of it), where the gods orchestrate a marriage that comes with unforeseen consequences.
What mischief lies concealed / In this design I know not; but I know / Who thinks of marrying hath already taken / One step upon the road to penitence.
Editor's note
Hermes confesses that he doesn't completely grasp Zeus's plan, yet he delivers a clever punchline: anyone contemplating marriage has already embarked on the path to regret. This dry, witty remark paints Hermes as a savvy, somewhat cynical commentator on both human and divine matters.
Forth I launch / On the sustaining air, nor fear to fall / Like Icarus, nor swerve aside like him / Who drove amiss Hyperion's fiery steeds.
Editor's note
As Hermes takes to the skies, he sets himself apart from two well-known mythological missteps — Icarus, who soared too near the sun, and Phaëthon, who lost command of the sun-chariot. Unlike those impulsive youths, Hermes is a skilled and confident flyer. These references enhance his stature while also highlighting his self-assured character.
I sink, I fly! The yielding element / Folds itself round about me like an arm,
Editor's note
The poem concludes with a lovely, gentle image: the air envelops Hermes like a mother cradling her child. After all the cleverness and references to mythology, Longfellow finishes with a sense of warmth and awe. Here, flight isn't just a physical act; it feels profoundly comforting — a god truly at ease in his surroundings.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Winged sandals
- Hermes's sandals serve as the poem's most straightforward symbol—they embody duty, perpetual motion, and the weight of serving others. The act of clasping and unclasping them shapes the entire speech and symbolizes the unending cycle of divine service.
- The caduceus
- Hermes's staff represents his power as a messenger and herald. When he envisions it humming like Pan's pipes in the wind, it links him to music and trickery—two key aspects of his character in Greek mythology.
- Flight
- Flight in this poem represents freedom, joy, and mastery. Hermes's effortless soaring stands in stark contrast to the cautionary falls of Icarus and Phaëthon, turning his flight into a symbol of skill and divine confidence instead of reckless ambition.
- The maiden / Prometheus's marriage
- The unnamed maiden and the arranged marriage reference the Pandora myth, where a beautiful woman is sent as a divine deception with unforeseen consequences. The marriage represents a fate crafted by those in power — appearing as a gift while hiding mischief beneath the surface.
- The air as mother
- In the closing lines, the air surrounding Hermes is likened to a mother gently cradling her child. This imagery shifts the sky from a barren void into a nurturing, vibrant presence, implying that Hermes — despite his cleverness and constant activity — is truly at home and at peace in his element.
§06Historical context
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