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ODE IV. by Sappho

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A young woman lies awake alone in the middle of the night, unable to sleep or work, completely overwhelmed by her love for a young man.

Poet
Sappho
Themes
identity, loneliness, love
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ODE IV.

Sappho

L'AMANTE DÉLAISSÉE. La lune, au milieu de la nuit, A cessé d'éclairer la terre; Et moi, quand déjà l'heure fuit, Je vois ma couche solitaire! O ma mère! dans sa douleur, Ayez pitié de votre fille! Rien ne peut distraire son coeur, Ni la navette, ni l'aiguille. Et tout m'échappe de la main! Dans l'amour mon âme se noie; J'aime ce jeune homme sans frein A Vénus je suis tout en proie!

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

A young woman lies awake alone in the middle of the night, unable to sleep or work, completely overwhelmed by her love for a young man. She calls out to her mother for comfort, confessing that neither weaving nor sewing can take her mind off her feelings. Venus, the goddess of love, has completely taken hold of her.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. La lune, au milieu de la nuit, / A cessé d'éclairer la terre;

    Editor's note

    The moon has gone dark in the middle of the night, leaving the world without light. This moment isn't just a time-stamp; the lost moonlight reflects the speaker's feelings of abandonment and emptiness. In ancient Greek lyric, the moon was deeply connected to feminine experience and the realm of Aphrodite, making its disappearance feel especially significant.

  2. O ma mère! dans sa douleur, / Ayez pitié de votre fille!

    Editor's note

    The speaker suddenly turns and cries out to her mother, pleading for compassion. This direct appeal is one of the most powerful moments in the poem — rather than calling out to a lover or a deity, she seeks her parent. It highlights how young and vulnerable her pain is, revealing that love has torn away any facade of calm.

  3. Et tout m'échappe de la main! / Dans l'amour mon âme se noie;

    Editor's note

    Everything literally slips through her fingers — she cannot weave, cannot sew, cannot manage the everyday tasks that shape daily life. The image of her soul *drowning* in love is striking: this is not a gentle yearning but complete immersion. The final line, surrendering herself to Venus, shows that she feels desire as a force that has taken hold of her from the outside, not as a feeling she decided upon.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone is raw and confessional—there's a direct connection between the speaker and her pain. She isn’t just performing grief; she’s fully immersed in it. The poem shifts rapidly from quiet nighttime observation to a desperate call to her mother, then to a sense of helpless surrender. It feels urgent and unfiltered, capturing the sound of someone who has stopped trying to hold it all together.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

The darkened moon
The moon disappearing at midnight symbolizes abandonment and a loss of guidance. In Sappho's world, the moon represented femininity and was linked to Aphrodite, so its absence intensifies the speaker's feeling of being alone and vulnerable.
The solitary bed
The empty couch that the speaker notices during sleepless nights symbolizes her loneliness. It's a tangible reminder that the person she loves is absent, turning her pain into something real rather than just a vague feeling.
The navette and needle (weaving tools)
Weaving and sewing were the primary domestic tasks for women in ancient Greece, symbolizing order, virtue, and self-control. When these tasks slip from her hands, it reflects how love has completely unraveled her, taking away even the fundamental routines of her daily existence.
Venus (Aphrodite)
Naming Venus at the end isn't just for decoration. For Sappho and her audience, Aphrodite represented a powerful force that could take hold of someone. Describing her as *tout en proie* — completely prey — to Venus suggests that desire acts like a predator, hunting and ensnaring, rather than something the speaker has control over.

§06Historical context

Historical context

Sappho lived on the Greek island of Lesbos around 630–570 BCE and is one of the earliest lyric poets whose work has survived. She wrote intimately, in the first person, about desire, longing, and loss—an unusual approach for her time. Most of her poems exist only as fragments, preserved because later Greek and Roman writers quoted them to discuss meter or style. This particular poem has been handed down to us in a French verse translation; the title *L'Amante Délaissée* translates to "The Abandoned Lover." This means we're experiencing Sappho's work through the lens of a later European literary tradition. Still, her emotional essence shines through: the sleepless night, the plea to a mother, and the vulnerability in the face of Aphrodite's power. These themes recur throughout the fragments attributed to her.

§07FAQ

Questions readers ask

This text is a French translation, not the original work. Sappho composed her poetry in an ancient Greek dialect known as Aeolic. Her poems have mostly come down to us as fragments, cited by other ancient authors. Throughout the centuries, they have been translated into Latin, French, English, and various other languages. What we have here is one translator's interpretation of her words, influenced by the poetic conventions of their time in France.

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