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ODE II. by Sappho

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This is a French translation of Sappho's well-known "Ode to Aphrodite" (or "Phainetai moi"), one of the earliest love poems still around in Western literature.

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ODE II.

Sappho

A LA BIEN-AIMÉE. Il me semble l'égal des dieux Celui qui de ta voix s'enivre, Qui lit son bonheur dans tes yeux, Et qui près de toi se sent vivre! Ce doux souris, quand je te vois, Me trouble!... Interdite, oppressée, Sur ma lèvre expire ma voix, Et ma langue reste glacée!... Je brûle!... Des feux inconnus En moi courent de veine en veine... Je n'entends rien... je ne vois plus... Je suis tremblante et sans haleine... J'éprouve une froide sueur... Plus pâle que l'herbe flétrie, Je ne sens plus battre mon coeur; Je n'ai plus qu'un souffle de vie!

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

This is a French translation of Sappho's well-known "Ode to Aphrodite" (or "Phainetai moi"), one of the earliest love poems still around in Western literature. The speaker observes someone she loves chatting with another person and feels so engulfed by jealousy and longing that she feels like she might fall apart — unable to speak, see, or breathe. It’s a poem that captures the intense physical sensations of being utterly overwhelmed by love for someone who is out of reach.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. Il me semble l'égal des dieux / Celui qui de ta voix s'enivre...

    Editor's note

    The speaker begins by referring to anyone sitting near her as "equal to the gods." This person enjoys the rare privilege of hearing her voice and gazing into her eyes — a gift that feels almost heavenly. This establishes a key contrast that underpins the entire poem: the unnamed third party can easily connect with the beloved, while the speaker is shattered by even a mere glance.

  2. Ce doux souris, quand je te vois, / Me trouble!...

    Editor's note

    The moment the speaker catches sight of her beloved's smile, words escape her. Her voice falters, and her tongue goes numb. The exclamation marks and ellipses in this French version convey the stammering, fragmented nature of someone truly rendered speechless. Sappho describes physical reactions in a clinical, almost medical manner, which adds to the poem's modern feel.

  3. Je brûle!... Des feux inconnus / En moi courent de veine en veine...

    Editor's note

    Fire courses through her veins, her hearing fades, her sight dims. Her body is shutting down, losing one sense after another. Sappho navigates a checklist of physical breakdown — fire, deafness, blindness, trembling — resembling a panic attack from within. The "unknown fires" hint at desire as an alien force that has invaded her from the outside.

  4. J'éprouve une froide sueur... / Plus pâle que l'herbe flétrie...

    Editor's note

    The final stanza leans into imagery of near-death: cold sweat, a pallor likened to withered grass, a heart that has stopped, and just a thread of breath left. The reference to "herbe flétrie" (withered grass) is one of Sappho's most famed images in the original Greek, and it remains unchanged here. The poem insists that love feels just like dying.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone is urgent and raw—this poem doesn’t just admire love from a distance; it feels like a live transmission from within a crisis. Each stanza heightens the physical distress, and the punctuation (with its exclamation marks and ellipses) creates a breathless, fragmented rhythm. There’s no resolution or comfort to be found. The speaker just shares what’s happening to her body and then falls silent.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

The god-like man
The person sitting with the beloved embodies everything the speaker feels they cannot be at that moment — calm, close, and allowed to relish the beloved's company. Referring to him as "equal to the gods" reflects both admiration and a sense of anguish.
Fire in the veins
"Des feux inconnus" (unknown fires) coursing through the veins captures Sappho's depiction of desire as an internal, uncontrollable force — a flame that ignites from within rather than providing warmth from the outside.
Withered grass
"Plus pâle que l'herbe flétrie" is a well-known simile from ancient poetry. Grass that has lost its green signifies it's beyond its prime — by likening herself to it, the speaker indicates she is on the brink of existence.
Frozen tongue
The inability to speak is both literal (she is struck dumb) and symbolic—language represents the poet's entire power, and love has stripped it away. The poet, who relies on words for her craft, finds herself without them.
The smile
"Ce doux souris" (that sweet smile) is what causes everything to fall apart. It represents the beloved's effortless hold over the speaker — one tiny, unthinking gesture unravels everything.

§06Historical context

Historical context

Sappho lived on the Greek island of Lesbos between 630 and 570 BCE and is among the few ancient Greek poets whose work has survived in significant amounts. This ode, referred to in classical studies as "Phainetai moi" (Fragment 31), was kept alive in part because the Roman critic Longinus quoted it in full in his treatise *On the Sublime*, using it as a prime example of expressing deep emotion in poetry. The French text provided here is a verse translation, probably from the 18th or 19th century, a time when Sappho experienced a revival among European Romantic poets. The poem is directed at a woman, which sparked controversy over the centuries and helped the term "lesbian" make its way into modern languages. Catullus created a well-known Latin adaptation (Poem 51), and this ode has been retranslated more than almost any other short poem out there.

§07FAQ

Questions readers ask

The speaker is talking to a woman she loves — the "bien-aimée" (beloved) mentioned in the title. Nearby, a third person, portrayed as god-like, is sitting next to this woman, savoring her voice and gaze, which stirs an intense reaction in the speaker.

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