The Annotated Edition
Mysterious Doings by Eugene Field
A narrator strolls through the woods and keeps spotting odd sights: a hunter who pays no attention to the deer, a girl who overlooks the fish, and eventually a horse without a rider and an empty boat, as a young man and woman drift off together beneath the willows.
- Poet
- Eugene Field
- Core theme
- Beauty
Study actions
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
As once I rambled in the woods / I chanced to spy amid the brake
Editor's note
The narrator introduces the first mystery: a huntsman rides by a lake teeming with deer but doesn't shoot a single one. Instead, he simply blows his horn. The sight of the velvet bucks running freely, paired with the hunter's indifference, suggests that his thoughts are focused elsewhere — on someone, rather than on hunting. Field takes on the role of an innocent observer, presenting the scene as a puzzling situation he happened upon by chance.
As on I strolled beside that lake, / A pretty maid I chanced to see
Editor's note
Now the narrator sees a young woman fishing, but the fish are practically leaping into her boat and she still catches none — she is too caught up in her singing. The detail that the fish "gambolled to their hearts' content" adds a touch of humor: even the fish can tell she isn’t really focused. Her singing suggests she is lovesick or daydreaming about someone, rather than genuinely interested in fishing.
As later yet I roamed my way, / A lovely steed neighed loud and long
Editor's note
The final stanza wraps everything up with a smile. The horse stands without a rider, the boat floats aimlessly, and the fishermaid's song drifts through the air—because the huntsman and the maid have sneaked away together beneath the willows. The narrator's last line, "I can't explain it all, can you?", is a playful act of innocence. He knows exactly what's happening, and the reader does too. The humor hits because Field has kept the obvious conclusion just out of reach for a moment too long.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The abandoned hunt
- The huntsman who overlooks the deer symbolizes love taking precedence over practicality. He entered the woods with the intention to hunt, yet something — or someone — has rendered that objective utterly unimportant.
- The empty boat
- The drifting, unmanned boat in the final stanza symbolizes the remnants of what’s left behind when two people choose one another. It also shows that the fisherwoman has gone ashore to meet the huntsman.
- The willows
- Willows have been linked to love, longing, and shelter in literature for ages. Field describes them as "kindly," suggesting they actively participate—nature is embracing and safeguarding the couple's moment together.
- The horn and the song
- Both the huntsman's horn and the maid's song are sounds that travel far. They act as signals—each character announcing their presence to the other before they finally come together.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- iambic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- ABABCDCD ABABCDCD ABABCDCD
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem actually about?
It tells the story of two people falling in love. The huntsman and the fisherwoman become so captivated by one another that they forget their original purpose. By the final stanza, they've left behind their horse and boat, slipping away together beneath the willows.
Why does the narrator keep saying he doesn't understand what is happening?
That’s the joke. The narrator is intentionally acting clueless, pretending to be confused by scenes that are clearly romantic. The humor arises from the contrast between his fake bewilderment and the reader’s immediate comprehension. It’s a playful nod to the audience.
What does the empty boat represent?
The drifting boat in the final stanza serves as a subtle indication that the fisherwoman has departed — she has gone to meet the huntsman. It also symbolizes the joyous surrender of certain things when love takes charge.
Why are the willows described as 'kindly'?
Field depicts the willows as inviting and sheltering, offering the couple both shade and seclusion. This portrayal allows nature to seem supportive of their romance, aligning perfectly with the poem's warm and friendly tone.
What is the rhyme scheme and does it matter?
Each stanza has a relaxed ballad-style rhythm, with the second and fourth lines rhyming. Field also includes internal rhymes within the lines, such as "huntsman ride his way beside" and "fishing away for finny prey." This lively, song-like beat enhances the playful tone, giving the poem a singable quality.
Is this poem meant for children or adults?
It works for both audiences, but the humor is primarily targeted at adults. Kids laugh at the amusing images of a hunter who refuses to hunt and a fisher who won’t fish. Meanwhile, adults quickly pick up on the romantic undertones, which is where the poem's true cleverness lies.
What literary tradition is Field drawing on?
Field is having fun with the pastoral tradition—a literary style that's been around for ages, featuring idealized characters like shepherds, hunters, and maidens in serene natural settings, often to delve into themes of love. He incorporates all the familiar elements—the woods, the lake, the willows—but transforms it into a humorous sketch.
What does the huntsman blowing his horn mean?
On the surface, his behavior seems odd—he's on a hunt yet ignoring the deer. The horn serves as a signal, announcing his presence across the landscape. The term "field" suggests he isn't genuinely hunting; instead, he’s likely calling out to someone, probably the fisherwoman on the lake.
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MLA
Field, Eugene. "Mysterious Doings." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/mysterious-doings-eugene-field/.
APA
Field, E. (n.d.). Mysterious doings. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/mysterious-doings-eugene-field/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn Eugene Field's comic poem "Mysterious Doings," a series of deliberately "mysterious" scenes—a huntsman who ignores his quarry, a fishermaiden who ignores her catch, and two young people who wander off together beneath the …
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