The Annotated Edition
Miles Standish by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This is the opening section of Longfellow's epic poem about Miles Standish, a real military captain from the Pilgrim era in the 1620s Plymouth Colony.
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In the Old Colony days, in Plymouth the land of the Pilgrims, / To and fro in a room of his simple and primitive dwelling,
Editor's note
Longfellow starts with a broad, almost cinematic scene: Plymouth Colony in the early 1620s. Miles Standish paces his empty room like a trapped animal. The hexameter rhythm, drawn from classic epics such as the *Iliad*, immediately suggests that this story is intended to evoke an ancient heroic tale set in America.
Suddenly breaking the silence, the diligent scribe interrupting, / Spake, in the pride of his heart, Miles Standish the Captain of Plymouth.
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Standish begins to boast about his weapons and military achievements. He points out the dent in his breastplate from a Spanish bullet that nearly took his life, joking that commanding his army of twelve makes him feel like Julius Caesar. The humor is light-hearted—Longfellow clearly has a fondness for Standish, even as he teases him about his bravado. Alden listens attentively but continues to write, revealing much about their relationship.
Long at the window he stood, and wistfully gazed on the landscape, / Washed with a cold gray mist, the vapory breath of the east-wind,
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The mood changes dramatically. Standish sees the grave of his first wife, Rose, on the hill — she was the first Mayflower passenger to pass away. The gray mist outside reflects his sorrow. Longfellow adds a somber detail: the colonists buried wheat over their graves to conceal the number of deaths caused by Native scouts. Bravado fades into genuine sadness here.
Fixed to the opposite wall was a shelf of books, and among them / Prominent three, distinguished alike for bulk and for binding;
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Standish seeks solace in his bookshelf and discovers three options: a military manual, Caesar's *Commentaries*, and the Bible. He chooses Caesar—an insight into his mindset. Meanwhile, Alden continues to write letters home, and the closing lines repeatedly mention the name Priscilla. That name hits like a subtle bomb, suggesting an unfolding love story.
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- The weapons on the wall
- Standish's polished arms reflect his identity as a soldier and his desire for control. He takes the time to polish them himself — 'serve yourself, would you be well served' — indicating that he relies on no one but himself to care for what is important to him.
- Rose Standish's grave on the hill
- The buried wife represents all that the Pilgrims gave up and lost during their journey. The wheat planted over the graves to mislead Native scouts intertwines personal sorrow with a shared survival tactic—love and death become hidden from view.
- The three books (Caesar, Bible, artillery manual)
- The shelf reflects Standish's soul across three volumes. His choice of Caesar over the Bible suggests that while his faith is genuine, his instincts lean towards the military. The Bible, positioned between the two war books, adds a subtle irony that Longfellow doesn't emphasize.
- The gray mist and cold landscape
- The New England weather outside the window serves as an emotional mirror. When Standish is boasting, the scene is lively and indoors; but when grief appears, the camera shifts to fog and a steel-blue ocean—nature reflecting the colony's inner life.
- Priscilla's name in the letters
- The name shows up only at the end of the section, but it carries significant weight. Alden has been quietly writing about her while Standish talks about war. This contrast creates the poem's main tension: the soldier's world versus the lover's world.
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§07FAQ
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Is this poem based on a true story?
Sure! Here’s the humanized version:
Mostly yes, at least in broad strokes. Miles Standish, John Alden, and Priscilla Mullins were indeed real passengers on the Mayflower. There’s a popular legend that Standish asked Alden to pursue Priscilla on his behalf, and that Priscilla told Alden to speak for himself. This story has been passed down through Alden family tradition. Interestingly, Longfellow was a descendant of John and Priscilla. While the historical record doesn't confirm every detail, the main characters and their relationships are based on real people.
Why did Longfellow use such a long, unusual meter?
He chose dactylic hexameter, the same meter used in Homer's Iliad and Virgil's Aeneid. This choice was intentional: Longfellow aimed to make the Pilgrim story feel as grand and mythic as the founding tales of Greece and Rome. The meter creates a rolling, wave-like rhythm that complements both the sea voyage in the background and the epic nature of the subject.
Who is John Alden, and why does he matter?
John Alden is Standish's young friend and secretary, the one writing letters at the pine table. He’s the emotional opposite of Standish: fair, gentle, literary, and already harboring secret feelings for Priscilla Mullins. The contrast between these two men drives the entire poem. Standish embodies action and armor, while Alden represents feeling and words.
What happened to Rose Standish?
Rose Standish was Miles Standish's first wife, and she tragically passed away during the harsh first winter of Plymouth Colony—the very winter that claimed the lives of about half the Mayflower passengers. Longfellow notes that she was the first to die among those who arrived on the Mayflower. Her grave on the hill, concealed with wheat to protect it from Native scouts, stands out as one of the poem's most hauntingly poignant images.
Why does Standish compare himself to Caesar?
It's a joke Longfellow is making at Standish's expense — and Standish is somewhat aware of it. Caesar famously knew each of his soldiers by name; Standish claims he does the same, but his army consists of just twelve men. The humor is warm-hearted. Longfellow uses it to highlight that Standish is truly brave and competent, yet also a bit absurd in his self-importance.
What is the significance of the howitzer on the church roof?
Standish describes it as 'a preacher who speaks to the purpose' — a cannon that fires 'irresistible logic' at the 'heathen.' There's a dark humor in this: the Puritans actually mounted a weapon of war on their place of worship. Longfellow uses this imagery to illustrate the Puritan mindset, where military defense and religious mission were entirely intertwined.
What does the ending of this section hint at?
The final lines show that Alden's letters home are 'full of the name and the fame of the Puritan maiden Priscilla.' This is the poem's first mention of Priscilla, and it feels like a subtle revelation: while Standish has been focused on war and weapons, Alden has been preoccupied with love. This moment sets the stage for Standish to ask Alden to court Priscilla for him — the main conflict of the entire poem.
Is this poem anti-Native American?
By today's standards, yes, in some areas. The poem showcases 19th-century colonial attitudes: Native leaders such as Aspinet and Samoset are portrayed as threats to be pushed back, and the colonists concealing graves from 'Indian scouts' presents Native people as enemies. Longfellow wasn't critiquing colonialism — he was honoring Pilgrim mythology. Modern readers will see the biased viewpoint, even though the poem primarily centers on the love triangle instead of conflict.
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "Miles Standish." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/miles-standish-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). Miles standish. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/miles-standish-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
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1 ptIn 'Miles Standish,' Longfellow strategically juxtaposes martial bravado and suppressed grief to expose the emotional cost of the Puritan soldier's self-mythology: Standish's compulsive polishing of weapons and his theatrical cataloguing of …
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