Mercy
Have pity, Lord! let penitence
Atone for disobedience,
Nor let the fruit of man's offence
Be endless misery!
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Mercy by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
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A brief yet urgent prayer, "Mercy" expresses Longfellow's heartfelt request for God to embrace human repentance rather than condemn humanity eternally for its sins.
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
A brief yet urgent prayer, "Mercy" expresses Longfellow's heartfelt request for God to embrace human repentance rather than condemn humanity eternally for its sins. The speaker implores that genuine sorrow for misdeeds should suffice to outweigh disobedience. This four-line poem captures one of Christianity's enduring hopes: that a loving God will not allow our failures to define us forever.
§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Have pity, Lord! let penitence / Atone for disobedience,
Editor's note
The poem begins in the middle of a cry — skipping any warm-up or scene-setting, it makes a straightforward appeal to God. "Have pity" is an urgent request, not a polite suggestion. The speaker offers "penitence" (true sorrow and regret for wrongdoing) as the way to settle the debt of "disobedience" — the act of breaking God's commands. The rhyme of *penitence* and *disobedience* connects the solution directly to the issue.
Nor let the fruit of man's offence / Be endless misery!
Editor's note
"The fruit of man's offence" alludes to the biblical Fall — the notion that Adam and Eve's disobedience in Eden brought suffering to all of humanity. Longfellow pleads that this fruit, this outcome, doesn’t persist indefinitely. The exclamation mark at the end elevates the poem from a simple request to something that feels more like anguish. "Endless misery" is the speaker's greatest fear, and stating it directly lends the poem its emotional impact.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
The tone is urgent and sincere—this is not a calm, meditative prayer but a desperate one. There’s no ornamentation or storytelling detour. The speaker goes straight to the point and remains focused, which gives the poem a raw, almost breathless quality. Beneath the urgency lies a profound trust that the God being addressed has the capacity for mercy; if the speaker had lost all hope, this poem wouldn’t exist.
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Penitence
- Penitence represents our ability to acknowledge our mistakes and truly regret them. According to the poem's reasoning, it's the only resource a flawed individual has — not good actions, not purity, just sincere remorse presented as a form of atonement.
- The fruit of man's offence
- A clear reflection of the biblical Fall, where consuming the forbidden fruit introduced sin and suffering. In this context, it symbolizes the lasting effects of human disobedience — the burden of history and moral failure that each individual bears.
- Endless misery
- This phrase represents damnation or permanent spiritual ruin. It's the worst outcome the speaker can envision, and putting it at the very end of the poem gives it the strongest impact—something that must be avoided at all costs.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- iambic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- AAAB
§07Historical context
Historical context
Longfellow wrote during the 19th century, a time when American Protestant culture was deeply engaged with issues of sin, redemption, and divine judgment—concerns that resonated deeply in everyday life. He had a profound knowledge of the Bible and European religious poetry, and short devotional verses like this one were common, serving as a sort of condensed liturgy. Longfellow's own experiences were steeped in grief: his first wife passed away at a young age, and his second wife died in a tragic fire in 1861. Regardless of whether this poem directly reflects his personal losses, it fits within a poetic tradition that views prayer as a literary expression. The poem's short length speaks volumes: mercy isn’t something to debate at length; it’s a plea made simply and with urgency.
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
What is the poem 'Mercy' by Longfellow about?
It's a four-line prayer that asks God to accept our repentance as enough to atone for sin and to save humanity from eternal suffering due to disobedience.
What does 'the fruit of man's offence' mean?
It refers to the biblical story of the Fall, where Adam and Eve's disobedience—represented by eating the forbidden fruit—introduced sin and suffering into the world. Longfellow uses this to illustrate the painful consequences that arise from human wrongdoing.
What is the rhyme scheme of this poem?
The poem uses an AAAB rhyme scheme: penitence, disobedience, and offence create a rhyme, while misery is the final word that doesn't rhyme, bringing a strong sense of closure to the plea. This unique placement makes "misery" feel even more impactful.
Why is the poem so short?
The brevity is intentional. A true plea for mercy doesn’t require complex arguments — it demands straightforwardness and honesty. This concise format reflects the urgency of the speaker's feelings.
Is this poem religious?
Yes, it does. It speaks directly to God, employs Christian theological terms like penitence, disobedience, and offence, and references the biblical story of the Fall. It firmly belongs to the tradition of devotional or prayer poetry.
What does 'penitence atone for disobedience' mean?
To atone means to make up for a wrongdoing or to compensate for it. The speaker is asking God to recognize true sorrow and regret (penitence) as sufficient to erase the debt incurred by violating God's commands (disobedience).
What is the mood or tone of the poem?
Urgent and desperate, yet not without hope. The speaker is making a strong plea, which shows a belief that it might be heard. If there were truly no hope, there wouldn’t be any reason to ask.
Citation
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "Mercy." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/mercy-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). Mercy. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/mercy-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
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