The Annotated Edition
This brief dramatic poem presents the Angel Gabriel's greeting to Mary during the Annunciation — that pivotal moment in Christian scripture when Mary discovers she will be the mother of Jesus.
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The Lord of heaven is with thee now! / Blessed among all women thou,
Editor's note
Gabriel begins with words taken directly from the Gospel of Luke — a declaration that God’s presence is with Mary, setting her apart from all other women. The exclamation mark adds urgency; this is an announcement, not a gentle whisper. Longfellow maintains elevated and formal language to reflect the seriousness of the moment.
MARY, setting down the pitcher. / What can this mean? No one is near,
Editor's note
The stage direction — Mary setting down a pitcher — is a clever little detail. It brings the supernatural into the realm of the everyday: she was simply fetching water, engaged in ordinary household tasks. Her spoken lines reveal real confusion and a growing sense of fear. She hears the words but can’t find where they’re coming from, and that disconnect between the sacred voice and the emptiness surrounding her is what makes her uneasy.
Here the ANGEL, appearing to her, shall say:
Editor's note
This closing stage direction marks the end of the poem — or more accurately, a handoff. Longfellow leaves Gabriel's next words blank, inviting readers who know the biblical story to fill in the silence. It creates a purposeful pause at the edge of the miraculous, capturing the tension right before full revelation.
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