The Annotated Edition
EVADNE by H. D.
In this poem, Evadne reflects on the love she shared with Apollo, the Greek god of light.
- Poet
- H. D.
- Era
- Modernist (1921)
- Themes
- identity, love, memory
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
I first tasted under Apollo's lips / love and love sweetness,
Editor's note
Evadne introduces herself and quickly gets to the point: her romantic experience with Apollo. The choice of the word "tasted" is intentional—love is portrayed as something physical, sensory, and almost edible. She mentions her name twice in this stanza, creating a sense of ritual self-declaration reminiscent of ancient hymns. By the end of the stanza, she fully defines herself through this relationship: she was the "mate of the god of light."
His hair was crisp to my mouth / as the flower of the crocus,
Editor's note
The second stanza delves deeply into the body. Each image conveys a texture or temperature: crisp hair like a crocus flower, cool silver cress on a riverbank, his mouth gliding along her chin and throat. H.D. weaves plant imagery onto the god's body, grounding him in the natural world instead of portraying him as a remote divine being. The phrase "over and over" emerges here for the first time, creating a slow, looping, almost trance-like rhythm in the stanza.
Still between my arm and shoulder, / I feel the brush of his hair,
Editor's note
The final stanza changes tense with just one word: "Still." Everything that came before was a memory; now the feeling is immediate and continuous. Her hands "keep the gold they took" — they continue to hold the warmth and color of Apollo's body, portrayed as a handful of yellow flowers. The poem concludes not with loss but with a sense of lasting possession. The experience has become part of her, woven into her very being and won't fade away.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Apollo's hair / yellow flowers
- Apollo's hair is first described as crisp like a crocus and later as "that great arm-full of yellow flowers." The god's body blends seamlessly into the natural world. This connection to his domain — sunlight, gold, radiance — is clear, even though H.D. never explicitly states it.
- Violets and hyacinth (Evadne's hair)
- Evadne refers to her hair as being like violets or hyacinths. Both flowers carry significant mythological meanings in Greek culture—hyacinth in particular is associated with Apollo. By describing her hair in floral terms, H.D. elevates both lovers to the same level: they are equally connected to nature, equally beautiful, and equally fundamental.
- The hands
- In the final stanza, Evadne's hands "keep the gold they took." Here, hands represent memory—they hold onto what the mind might forget. This image implies that the body can preserve experiences more reliably than our thoughts or words.
- Silver cress on Erotos bank
- "Erotos" translates to "of Eros," referring to the bank of a river named after desire itself. The cool, silver cress that grows there adds a sense of freshness and natural ease to the erotic encounter, rather than evoking feelings of transgression or danger.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
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