The Annotated Edition
Evadne by H. D.
In this poem, Evadne reflects on the love she shared with Apollo, the Greek god of light.
- Poet
- H. D.
- Composed
- 1921 · Modernist
- Core theme
- Identity
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
I first tasted under Apollo's lips / love and love sweetness,
Editor's note
Evadne introduces herself and quickly gets to the point: her romantic experience with Apollo. The choice of the word "tasted" is intentional—love is portrayed as something physical, sensory, and almost edible. She mentions her name twice in this stanza, creating a sense of ritual self-declaration reminiscent of ancient hymns. By the end of the stanza, she fully defines herself through this relationship: she was the "mate of the god of light."
His hair was crisp to my mouth / as the flower of the crocus,
Editor's note
The second stanza delves deeply into the body. Each image conveys a texture or temperature: crisp hair like a crocus flower, cool silver cress on a riverbank, his mouth gliding along her chin and throat. H.D. weaves plant imagery onto the god's body, grounding him in the natural world instead of portraying him as a remote divine being. The phrase "over and over" emerges here for the first time, creating a slow, looping, almost trance-like rhythm in the stanza.
Still between my arm and shoulder, / I feel the brush of his hair,
Editor's note
The final stanza changes tense with just one word: "Still." Everything that came before was a memory; now the feeling is immediate and continuous. Her hands "keep the gold they took" — they continue to hold the warmth and color of Apollo's body, portrayed as a handful of yellow flowers. The poem concludes not with loss but with a sense of lasting possession. The experience has become part of her, woven into her very being and won't fade away.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Apollo's hair / yellow flowers
- Apollo's hair is first described as crisp like a crocus and later as "that great arm-full of yellow flowers." The god's body blends seamlessly into the natural world. This connection to his domain — sunlight, gold, radiance — is clear, even though H.D. never explicitly states it.
- Violets and hyacinth (Evadne's hair)
- Evadne refers to her hair as being like violets or hyacinths. Both flowers carry significant mythological meanings in Greek culture—hyacinth in particular is associated with Apollo. By describing her hair in floral terms, H.D. elevates both lovers to the same level: they are equally connected to nature, equally beautiful, and equally fundamental.
- The hands
- In the final stanza, Evadne's hands "keep the gold they took." Here, hands represent memory—they hold onto what the mind might forget. This image implies that the body can preserve experiences more reliably than our thoughts or words.
- Silver cress on Erotos bank
- "Erotos" translates to "of Eros," referring to the bank of a river named after desire itself. The cool, silver cress that grows there adds a sense of freshness and natural ease to the erotic encounter, rather than evoking feelings of transgression or danger.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- free verse
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
Who is Evadne in Greek mythology?
Evadne, a mortal woman from Greek mythology, captured the affection of Apollo and became the mother of Iamos, a renowned seer. She is mentioned in Pindar's Sixth Olympian Ode. H.D. reinterprets this character, leaving out the narrative of her son and centering solely on her passionate encounter with the god.
What does "I Evadne" repeated twice in the first stanza mean?
It feels like a ritual chant or a formal declaration of identity, reminiscent of ancient hymns and prayers. By repeating her name, Evadne claims her identity and presence — she isn't merely a passive figure in Apollo's tale; she is the one speaking, the subject, the one who remembers.
Why does H.D. describe Apollo using plant and flower imagery?
H.D. was an Imagist who focused on concrete, sensory details. By likening Apollo's hair to a crocus flower and his body to a handful of yellow blooms, she transforms the divine into something physical and tangible. This also ties him to his own imagery—sunlight, gold, and nature—without resorting to abstract language.
What does "Still" mean at the start of the third stanza?
It serves a dual purpose. It conveys "even now," indicating that the feeling is still present, not merely a distant recollection. Additionally, it evokes a sense of stillness, as if the speaker is taking a moment to quietly focus on what her body experiences. This single word is the pivotal element around which the entire poem revolves.
Is this poem about loss or about possession?
It feels more like possession than loss. Evadne doesn't grieve for Apollo's absence. Instead, the last stanza emphasizes that her hands and skin still carry the experience. The poem suggests that a powerful encounter becomes a lasting part of the body.
What is Imagism, and how does this poem show it?
Imagism was a literary movement from the 1910s that advocated for poetry constructed from clear images, using free verse and avoiding unnecessary words. "Evadne" exemplifies this approach perfectly: it lacks a rhyme scheme, avoids abstract moralizing, and each line conveys a distinct texture, temperature, or sensation — like crisp hair, cool cress, and the brush of skin.
Why does H.D. use so many nature images to describe a god?
H.D.'s Greek world isn’t filled with marble statues and a remote Olympus — it’s wet, fragrant, and grounded in the earth. By describing Apollo through flowers, rivers, and plants, he shares a connection with Evadne. This approach levels the playing field, making their encounter feel more natural than supernatural.
What is the significance of "Erotos bank"?
"Erotos" is the genitive form of Eros, the Greek god of desire, so "Erotos bank" refers to a riverbank that belongs to Eros—a river of desire. By placing the cool silver cress there, it connects the natural world directly to erotic feelings, implying that desire and nature share a similar kind of force.
Citation
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MLA
D., H. "Evadne." 1921. Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/evadne-h-d/.
APA
D., H. (1921). Evadne. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/evadne-h-d/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn H. D.'s "EVADNE," the speaker not only recalls a divine encounter but rebuilds it through the body, insisting that erotic memory is a sensation that persists in skin, hand, and hair long after the god has gone. By grounding Evadne's …
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