The Annotated Edition
ENTER THREE ARCHANGELS. by Percy Bysshe Shelley
This is Shelley's translation of the well-known "Prologue in Heaven" from Goethe's *Faust*, where three archangels celebrate God's creation until Mephistopheles (the Devil) arrives to voice his grievances about humanity.
- Themes
- faith, identity, mortality
§01Quick summary
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§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
RAPHAEL: The sun makes music as of old / Amid the rival spheres of Heaven,
Editor's note
Raphael begins by referencing the ancient concept of *musica universalis* — the "music of the spheres" — suggesting that as the planets and sun move, they create a type of cosmic harmony. He portrays the sun racing along its set course with immense force, noting that even the angels gain strength just by gazing at it, despite their inability to fully grasp its essence. He concludes that the world appears as vibrant and flawless as it did on the day God created it.
GABRIEL: And swift and swift, with rapid lightness, / The adorned Earth spins silently,
Editor's note
Gabriel takes the baton and paints a picture of the Earth — spinning quickly yet quietly, alternating between the blissful light of day and the frightening darkness of night. He pulls back to reveal the sea, churning and crashing against the rocks, as everything — oceans, continents, the entire planetary system — moves in an endless, unstoppable flow. The term "adorned" suggests that the Earth is not merely a rock, but something dressed up and beautiful.
MICHAEL: And tempests in contention roar / From land to sea, from sea to land;
Editor's note
Michael is the warrior archangel, and his stanza captures the most intense violence. Storms clash across the globe, creating a "chain of power" around the Earth like a belt. Lightning strikes before the thunder rolls in. Yet, Michael shifts focus: amid all this chaos, God's servants continue to honor the "gentle changes" of His day. The fury of nature and the calmness of God's order coexist together.
CHORUS OF THE THREE: The Angels draw strength from Thy glance, / Though no one comprehend Thee may;—
Editor's note
The three archangels sing in unison, echoing Raphael's initial lines but now addressing God directly with "Thee" and "Thy." This change from describing the world to speaking to God is significant—it transforms the entire hymn into a prayer. The world shines just as brightly as it did on Creation's day, and the mystery of God remains complete. The repetition emphasizes that this incomprehensibility isn't an issue; it's part of the wonder.
MEPHISTOPHELES: As thou, O Lord, once more art kind enough / To interest Thyself in our affairs,
Editor's note
Mephistopheles enters and quickly undermines the majesty of the archangels' hymn with a sharp wit. He thanks God for "kindly" showing interest in earthly matters, as if God were just a preoccupied manager who pops in from time to time. He scoffs at the "high style" of the angels and suggests that his own words might actually make God chuckle — if God still found anything amusing anymore. The tone is cheeky yet strangely intimate, reminiscent of a court jester speaking to a king.
Nothing know I to say of suns and worlds; / I observe only how men plague themselves;—
Editor's note
Mephistopheles completely disregards the vastness of the cosmos. He cares nothing for suns or spheres — his focus is solely on observing how humans create their own unhappiness. Referring to humanity as "the little god o' the world," he speaks with sharp irony: people believe they’re unique because God granted them reason, yet they squander that reason to live in worse conditions than animals. His simile of the grasshopper — flitting, jumping, singing the same tune, and burying its nose in dung — is a brilliant display of scornful humor.
THE LORD: Have you no more to say? Do you come here / Always to scold, and cavil, and complain?
Editor's note
God seems almost amused by the situation. He’s not offended; instead, He simply inquires whether Mephistopheles ever has anything positive to say. Then, He introduces Faust as "My servant," and the true focus of the drama comes to light. God's calm confidence is unwavering: He understands that Faust serves Him in a muddled, unclear manner, yet He likens Faust to a young tree that will eventually bear fruit. This gardener metaphor paints God as patient rather than all-powerful.
MEPHISTOPHELES: What will You bet?—now am sure of winning— / Only, observe You give me full permission
Editor's note
Mephistopheles directly proposes the wager, sure he can lead Faust down his chosen path. God consents but adds one condition: as long as Faust is alive, the Devil can act freely — but man must be allowed to make mistakes while he is still striving. This is the theological essence of the scene: error and struggle are not failures; they define the human experience, and God acknowledges them. Mephistopheles happily agrees, mentioning that he prefers the living — corpses are dull to him, and he enjoys toying with his victims before devouring them.
THE LORD: Well, well! it is permitted thee. Draw thou / His spirit from its springs;
Editor's note
God grants permission and then turns to the pure angels, urging them to revel in eternal beauty while the drama unfolds below. His remarks about the Devil are noteworthy: God explains that He intentionally gave humanity the Devil as a *companion* to prevent humans from becoming lazy and complacent. In this view, evil serves as a catalyst for action and creativity. The Lord's concluding image — "floating phantoms" of beauty — carries a Romantic quality, echoing Shelley's own sensibility in the translation.
MEPHISTOPHELES: From time to time I visit the old fellow, / And I take care to keep on good terms with Him.
Editor's note
The scene concludes with Mephistopheles standing alone, sharing a sly remark with the audience. He refers to God as "the old fellow" and takes pride in maintaining his favor. The humor lies in the fact that even the Devil must show some courtesy to God — and surprisingly, God is willing to engage with him. This moment breaks any lingering seriousness and serves as a reminder that this work is a comedy as much as it is a cosmic drama.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The Sun
- The sun symbolizes divine order and the *musica universalis*—a concept passed down from Pythagoras and Plato, which suggests that the cosmos creates a sort of music through its precise, mathematical movements. It also embodies God's creative power, a source of strength for the angels, who can tap into it but will never fully grasp its essence.
- The Grasshopper
- Mephistopheles likens humanity to a long-legged grasshopper that flits, jumps, and sings the same song endlessly, while burying its nose in dung. This serves as a symbol of human futility and self-deception — beings who believe they are unique yet get caught in the same pointless cycles, rummaging through filth.
- The Wager
- The wager between God and Mephistopheles for Faust's soul represents the struggle between human potential and frailty. It presents human moral life as a competition, yet God seems quietly assured of the result — turning the whole situation into a test instead of a real gamble.
- The Tempest / Storm
- Michael's storms that surge from land to sea and create a "chain of power" around the Earth illustrate the destructive forces found in nature and human life. However, as part of God's creation, they also convey the notion that chaos and violence exist within a greater divine order.
- The Snake
- Mephistopheles' mention of "my old paramour, the famous Snake" directly refers to the serpent in the Garden of Eden. This connects him to the first tempter and positions the Faust wager as a reenactment of the Fall — yet another effort to exploit human curiosity and desire against humanity.
- Creation's Day
- The phrase "bright as at Creation's day" is found in both the archangels' hymn and Mephistopheles' speech, where he employs it ironically. For the angels, it represents the lasting perfection of the world; for Mephistopheles, it suggests that humans remain as foolish as they have always been. This same image conveys contrasting meanings based on the speaker.
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