The Annotated Edition
BY GIL VICENTE by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This short poem is a passionate plea from a lover to a sleeping girl, urging her to join him at dawn, before the world stirs to life.
- Meter
- ballad meter
- Rhyme
- ABCB DEFE
- Themes
- beauty, freedom, love
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
If thou art sleeping, maiden, / Awake and open thy door,
Editor's note
The speaker stands outside a young woman's door at the first light of morning. The playful conditional — *if* thou art sleeping — suggests he thinks she might already be awake and waiting. The term "maiden" adds a touch of courtly tenderness. There’s a sense of urgency: open the door *now*, because time is running out.
Wait not to find thy slippers, / But come with thy naked feet;
Editor's note
Here, the speaker removes any doubt or need for preparation. Slippers may seem like a minor, homey detail, but they represent all the practical reasons someone might hesitate. Bare feet indicate complete surrender to the moment—no protection, no facade. The phrase "naked feet" also carries a sensory thrill that makes the escape feel personal and vibrant.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- Break of day
- Dawn is that brief moment when the private realm of night meets the public realm of day. The speaker intentionally selects this time—it represents the final chance for a secret departure, infusing the entire poem with a feeling of urgency and immediacy.
- Naked feet / no slippers
- Going barefoot means letting go of comfort, caution, and social norms. It's a small act of freedom that symbolizes the bigger leap of faith the maiden is being asked to embrace.
- Dewy grass and wide waters
- The landscape ahead is wet, open, and untamed — a stark contrast to the closed, dry room the maiden is departing. These natural obstacles aren't warnings; they embody the promise and wildness of the life waiting for her.
- The closed door
- The door the speaker asks the maiden to open represents both a physical barrier and a deeper meaning. It divides her protected, passive existence from the vibrant world of activity, uncertainty, and love that awaits her beyond.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- ballad meter
- Rhyme
- ABCB DEFE
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
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