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BY GIL VICENTE by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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This short poem is a passionate plea from a lover to a sleeping girl, urging her to join him at dawn, before the world stirs to life.

Poet
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Meter
ballad meter
Rhyme
ABCB DEFE
Themes
beauty, freedom, love
The PoemFull text

BY GIL VICENTE

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

If thou art sleeping, maiden, Awake and open thy door, 'T is the break of day, and we must away, O'er meadow, and mount, and moor. Wait not to find thy slippers, But come with thy naked feet; We shall have to pass through the dewy grass, And waters wide and fleet.

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

This short poem is a passionate plea from a lover to a sleeping girl, urging her to join him at dawn, before the world stirs to life. He tells her to forget about shoes — just come as she is, barefoot, through the dewy grass and flowing water. It beautifully captures the exhilarating, carefree spirit of young love and the thrill of escaping together.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. If thou art sleeping, maiden, / Awake and open thy door,

    Editor's note

    The speaker stands outside a young woman's door at the first light of morning. The playful conditional — *if* thou art sleeping — suggests he thinks she might already be awake and waiting. The term "maiden" adds a touch of courtly tenderness. There’s a sense of urgency: open the door *now*, because time is running out.

  2. Wait not to find thy slippers, / But come with thy naked feet;

    Editor's note

    Here, the speaker removes any doubt or need for preparation. Slippers may seem like a minor, homey detail, but they represent all the practical reasons someone might hesitate. Bare feet indicate complete surrender to the moment—no protection, no facade. The phrase "naked feet" also carries a sensory thrill that makes the escape feel personal and vibrant.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

The tone blends tenderness with urgency—a whisper that feels like a command. The lines have a lilting, song-like quality that makes the urgency feel less threatening and more like an invitation to adventure. Beneath this lightness, there’s a subtle romance that belongs to the hour just before sunrise.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

Break of day
Dawn is that brief moment when the private realm of night meets the public realm of day. The speaker intentionally selects this time—it represents the final chance for a secret departure, infusing the entire poem with a feeling of urgency and immediacy.
Naked feet / no slippers
Going barefoot means letting go of comfort, caution, and social norms. It's a small act of freedom that symbolizes the bigger leap of faith the maiden is being asked to embrace.
Dewy grass and wide waters
The landscape ahead is wet, open, and untamed — a stark contrast to the closed, dry room the maiden is departing. These natural obstacles aren't warnings; they embody the promise and wildness of the life waiting for her.
The closed door
The door the speaker asks the maiden to open represents both a physical barrier and a deeper meaning. It divides her protected, passive existence from the vibrant world of activity, uncertainty, and love that awaits her beyond.

§06Form & structure

Form & structure

Meter
ballad meter
Rhyme
ABCB DEFE

§07Historical context

Historical context

Longfellow crafted this poem as a loose translation or interpretation of the work of Gil Vicente, a playwright and poet from Portugal and Spain who lived around 1465 to 1536. Vicente is often regarded as the father of Portuguese theatre, and his lyric poems — many of which are dawn songs, or *albas* — are celebrated for their straightforward, musical language and themes of love and parting at sunrise. Longfellow had a keen interest in European literature and languages, producing numerous translations and adaptations throughout his career. By naming the poem after Vicente, Longfellow indicates that he’s honoring Vicente’s work rather than claiming it as entirely his own. This poem fits into the tradition of the *alba* or aubade — a genre with roots in medieval Provençal poetry — where lovers must part or meet at dawn.

§08FAQ

Questions readers ask

Longfellow crafted the English version, drawing inspiration from the style and spirit of Gil Vicente, a Portuguese poet and playwright from the 15th and 16th centuries. You could view it as a creative translation or tribute instead of a strict word-for-word rendering. As a professor of modern languages, Longfellow engaged in this type of work throughout his career.

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