The Annotated Edition
AND THERE THOU SHALT SERVE OTHER GODS, WHICH NEITHER THOU NOR THY by Percy Bysshe Shelley
This text isn't a poem in the traditional sense; it's a fragment of prose-essay by Shelley, likely taken from his early pamphlet *The Necessity of Atheism* or from the notes to *Queen Mab*.
- Themes
- doubt, faith, freedom
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The Jews are at this day remarkably tenacious of their religion. Moses also declares that they shall be subjected to these curses for disobedience...
Editor's note
Shelley begins by quoting Deuteronomy and referencing the books of Hosea and Isaiah. He argues that the prophecies in these texts are either too ambiguous to hold real significance ('the indelicate type might apply in a hundred senses to a hundred things') or that there is no concrete historical evidence that the authors wrote at the times tradition suggests. If you can't confirm *when* a prediction was written, you can't consider its later 'fulfillment' a miracle.
But prophecy requires proof in its character as a miracle; we have no right to suppose that a man foreknew future events from God...
Editor's note
This forms the logical foundation of Shelley's critique of prophecy. He presents a straightforward principle: you can't label something as a divine miracle without first eliminating all natural explanations. He sharpens this argument further — it's *more* likely that a text was composed after the event it claims to predict than that God genuinely communicated through a human, particularly given that history is rife with forged prophecies and false religions.
Lord Chesterfield was never yet taken for a prophet, even by a bishop, yet he uttered this remarkable prediction...
Editor's note
Shelley employs Lord Chesterfield's precise prediction of the French Revolution as a reductio ad absurdum. Chesterfield, known for his wit and aristocratic demeanor, was no saint, yet his forecast proved accurate. If we were to apply the Christian standard of evidence, we’d have to consider Chesterfield as divinely inspired as well. The paragraph concludes with a sharp point: while God is believed to reward faith and eternally punish doubt, belief has been demonstrated to be involuntary — rendering the entire system morally inconsistent.
The last proof of the Christian religion depends on the influence of the Holy Ghost...
Editor's note
Shelley turns to the third and final proof: the inner conviction granted by the Holy Spirit. He observes that those who assert this type of conviction "can do anything but account for their conviction" — they are unable to explain when it occurred or how. Since it completely bypasses the senses and reason, it is inherently impossible to examine or verify. Shelley sees this not as a strength of the argument but as its critical flaw.
Admitting, however, the usefulness or possibility of a divine revelation, unless we demolish the foundations of all human knowledge...
Editor's note
Here, Shelley presents a significant philosophical argument, referencing Locke's essay on Enthusiasm. If inner feeling is enough to validate religious truth, then the Muslim sacrificing himself for his prophet, the Hindu follower, the African worshipper, and the Aztec priest all possess equally valid 'proof' of their respective faiths. The orthodox Christian missionary who dismisses these feelings as false cannot then rely on similar emotions as evidence for Christianity. Unchecked enthusiasm (religious fervor) cannot substitute for reason.
Miracles cannot be received as testimonies of a disputed fact, because all human testimony has ever been insufficient to establish the possibility of miracles.
Editor's note
Shelley wraps up his summary verdict in two clear sentences: miracles can't validate Christianity since miracles themselves haven't been proven; prophecy hasn't passed the test of reason. Thus, the only true Christians would be those who were *truly* inspired — a group whose existence remains unproven by any of the three arguments we've just discussed.
Mox numine viso / Virgineei tumuere sinus...
Editor's note
Shelley ends with a Latin quote from Claudian's *Carmen Paschale* that vividly details the Virgin Birth. By selecting this passage — which presents the miraculous pregnancy in stark, almost clinical terms — and then questioning whether 'so monstrous and disgusting an absurdity' doesn't refute itself, Shelley encourages the reader to view the doctrine of the Virgin Birth not as a grand mystery but as a claim that, when laid out clearly, pushes the limits of belief.
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§05Symbols & metaphors
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- Prophecy
- Prophecy represents the larger issue of *authority*. Shelley uses it to question: why should we accept any claims about the supernatural? He argues that the same criteria used to validate biblical prophecy could validate any prediction made by anyone — meaning prophecy doesn't prove anything significant.
- Lord Chesterfield's prediction
- Chesterfield acts like a secular mirror reflecting the biblical prophets. He was worldly and irreligious, yet his insights were spot on. His example demonstrates that having accurate foresight doesn’t need a divine source; it just requires political intelligence and keen observation. This is why he serves as Shelley’s most powerful rhetorical tool in the piece.
- The Holy Ghost / inner conviction
- The Holy Ghost stands as the final stronghold in religious debate: the assertion that faith validates itself through personal experience. Shelley views this as the most perilous of the three proofs since it cannot be challenged from the outside — and he demonstrates that this very immunity renders it unfit as evidence.
- The Latin epigraph from Claudian
- The closing quotation about the Virgin Birth presents doctrine in a straightforward manner, without any reverent language to soften it. By citing a pagan Latin poet who describes the Incarnation in raw, almost grotesque terms, Shelley removes the miracle from its sacred context and prompts the reader to consider it as a simple factual assertion.
- The labyrinth of life
- The labyrinth, inspired by Locke, symbolizes the intricate nature of moral and philosophical choices in Shelley's view. Reason acts as the guiding thread that helps us navigate it. On the other hand, enthusiasm — that uncritical religious fervor — causes you to let go of the thread and lose your way.
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