The Annotated Edition
A VALENTINE by Eugene Field
A young boy sends Cupid to deliver his Valentine's Day message to his crush, acknowledging that she doesn't treat him well but insisting that his feelings remain strong.
- Poet
- Eugene Field
- Themes
- childhood, hope, identity
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Go, Cupid, and my sweetheart tell / I love her well.
Editor's note
The boy starts by sending Cupid as his messenger — a playful reference to the classic Valentine's Day tradition. This short rhyming couplet sets a sing-song, childlike tone for the entire poem right from the beginning.
Yes, though she tramples on my heart / And rends that bleeding thing apart;
Editor's note
Field takes the grand, dramatic language often found in adult romantic poetry—think trampled hearts and bleeding wounds—and channels it into a schoolboy crush. The humor lies in how exaggerated this 'suffering' is for such a scenario, and that's precisely the point.
And though she rolls a scornful eye / On doting me when I go by;
Editor's note
The girl either ignores him or regards him with disdain, but he continues to appear. The phrase 'doting me' perfectly reflects the helpless, devoted nature of a kid who simply can't stop liking someone who doesn't return his feelings.
And though she scouts at everything / As tribute unto her I bring--
Editor's note
'Scouts at' suggests that she mocks or dismisses his gifts. The term 'tribute' is another example of borrowed adult-romance language—he presents his apple, banana, and caramel as offerings to a queen, which makes the ordinary snack list all the more amusing.
Apple, banana, caramel-- / Haste, Cupid, to my love and tell,
Editor's note
The abrupt shift from lofty language to a simple list of snacks delivers the poem's first major comedic impact. These are the genuine gifts a boy can truly offer, and Field presents them with genuine sincerity.
And further say I have a sled / Cushioned in blue and painted red!
Editor's note
Now the boy plays his trump card: the sled. The details—cushioned in blue and painted red—reveal his pride. To him, this is like a grown man offering jewels.
The groceryman has promised I / Can 'hitch' whenever he goes by--
Editor's note
'Hitching' referred to attaching a sled to the back of a horse-drawn vehicle for a free ride — a popular and somewhat risky pastime for kids in the 1880s. Having a standing arrangement with the groceryman is a significant status symbol in his community.
Go, tell her that, and, furthermore, / Apprise my sweetheart that a score / Of other little girls implore
Editor's note
Here, the boy uses a classic romantic tactic: making her aware of the competition. He wants her to realize she’s not his only option, even though she clearly is. The formal word 'apprise' adds a humorous contrast between the fancy vocabulary and the everyday situation.
And tell her, Cupid, only she / Shall ride upon that sled with me!
Editor's note
After teasing the competition, he quickly reveals his true feelings—she's the only one he desires. The sled ride serves as his way of asking, "Will you be mine?" and it's surprisingly heartfelt beneath the humor.
Tell her this all, and further tell / I love her well.
Editor's note
The poem wraps up by returning to its opening lines, creating a neat and satisfying conclusion. The phrase 'I love her well' feels even warmer on the second reading, as we now understand the depth and nature of that love.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The sled
- The sled is the boy's most cherished possession and his ultimate romantic gesture. It represents all the big displays of affection — like jewels, flowers, and serenades — that grown-up lovers give. The specific details (red paint, blue cushion) highlight how genuine and valuable it is to him.
- Cupid
- Cupid is known as the classic messenger of love, but in this case, he's off on an unusual mission. His role as a go-between emphasizes the contrast between the age-old traditions of romance and the simple, playful love story that unfolds here.
- Apple, banana, caramel
- These snacks reflect the boy's genuine but modest resources. While an adult suitor might show up with roses or chocolates, he brings what he can afford. The list is amusing, yet it also illustrates that he's putting forth his best effort.
- The scornful eye
- The girl's dismissive glance represents unrequited love and the specific hurt of being overlooked by someone you admire. It reflects the 'cruel mistress' trope from classical love poetry, brought down to the schoolyard level.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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