The Annotated Edition
A CHAUCERIAN PARAPHRASE OF HORACE by Eugene Field
This poem playfully imitates Chaucer's medieval English and is written by Eugene Field.
- Poet
- Eugene Field
- Themes
- growing-up, identity, love
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
Syn that you, Chloe, to your moder sticken, / Maketh all ye yonge bacheloures full sicken;
Editor's note
The speaker begins by speaking directly to Chloe. "Syn that" translates to "since" — so: *since* you persist in holding on to your mother, all the young bachelors are left lovesick and frustrated. It’s a humorous exaggeration: her unwillingness to interact with potential suitors is causing distress among the entire male population.
Like as a lyttel deere you ben y-hiding / Whenas come lovers with theyre pityse chiding;
Editor's note
Chloe is likened to a small deer that darts away to hide whenever lovers come near with their "piteous" pleas. This deer comparison originates from Horace's *Odes* (I.23), where a girl named Chloe is portrayed as shying away from suitors like a fawn frightened by the woods. Field retains the classical reference but wraps it in a faux-medieval style.
Sothly it ben faire to give up your moder / For to beare swete company with some oder;
Editor's note
"Sothly" means "truly" — the speaker genuinely believes it's a fine and proper thing to leave your mother behind and enjoy sweet company with someone else (i.e., a husband). The tone shifts from playful teasing to gentle persuasion, suggesting that independence and partnership are both natural and beneficial.
Your moder ben well enow so farre shee goeth, / But that ben not farre enow, God knoweth;
Editor's note
Your mother is fine in her own way—but she doesn't quite measure up, God knows. This is the poem's clever little joke: a mother's love and presence are recognized as genuine and valuable, but they just can't take the place of a romantic partner. The phrase "God knoweth" adds a touch of irony, creating a conspiratorial wink.
Wherefore it ben sayed that foolysh ladyes / That marrye not shall leade an aype in Hadys;
Editor's note
Here, Field taps into a real medieval folk belief, also seen in Shakespeare, suggesting that women who die unmarried are doomed in the afterlife to guide an ape (which symbolizes foolishness) through Hades. This idea is presented humorously rather than with malice — the "foolish ladies" label is part of the humor — but it highlights how deeply marriage was ingrained in the social norms of the time Field is parodying.
But all that do with gode men wed full quickylye / When that they be on dead go to ye seints full sickerly.
Editor's note
The closing couplet reveals the reward aspect of the deal: women who marry good men go directly to the saints after death — with "sickerly" meaning "surely" or "certainly." It serves as a mock-theological punchline that leaves the poem with a lighthearted touch. The reasoning is intentionally absurd: marry wisely, gain paradise. Field delivers it earnestly, which adds to the humor.
§04Tone & mood
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§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The little deer
- The deer hiding in the forest, borrowed straight from Horace, represents Chloe's fearfulness and immaturity when it comes to love. A young deer is timid and relies on its mother—this is precisely the behavior the speaker is lightly poking fun at.
- The ape in Hades
- A genuine belief from medieval and Renaissance times (Shakespeare references it in *Much Ado About Nothing*) suggests that unmarried women guide apes—representing foolishness and lost opportunities—through the underworld after they die. Field employs this idea as a humorous threat rather than a serious moral caution.
- The mother
- Chloe's mother symbolizes the safety and comfort of childhood, which must be eventually outgrown. She isn’t portrayed as a villain — the poem acknowledges she is "well enow" — but she represents a phase of life that has to come to an end.
- The saints
- The saints anticipating well-married women in the afterlife represent a satirical take on religious rewards, transforming marriage into a means of gaining access to heaven. This image critiques how medieval and early modern culture cloaked social pressure in the guise of salvation.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
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