The Annotated Edition
Thora of Rimol by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This poem recounts the last moments of Jarl Hakon, a formidable Norse chieftain who takes refuge in a pigsty with his slave Karker, sheltered by a woman named Thora who loves him dearly.
- Core theme
- Betrayal
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§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
"Thora of Rimol! hide me! hide me! / Danger and shame and death betide me!"
Editor's note
Hakon rushes in, frantic and scared, pleading with Thora for a place to hide. The looming threats of danger, shame, and death make it clear that he’s in a dire situation. The urgency in his plea is palpable, and Longfellow uses the line "Thora, the fairest of women" at this point to firmly establish her as the emotional heart of the poem.
"Hakon Jarl! for the love I bear thee / Neither shall shame nor death come near thee!"
Editor's note
Thora responds immediately, stating her motive clearly: love. However, the hiding spot she suggests — a cave beneath a pigsty — is intentionally demeaning for a great earl. She preserves his life but at the expense of his dignity, creating a tragedy of its own.
So Hakon Jarl and his base thrall Karker / Crouched in the cave, than a dungeon darker,
Editor's note
The term "base" used for Karker carries significant weight—it indicates his low social status while hinting at his betrayal. King Olaf rides through, calling for Hakon, and Thora finds herself torn between her love for him and the king who is pursuing him. The cave's darkness reflects the moral shadows that are tightening around them.
"Rich and honored shall be whoever / The head of Hakon Jarl shall dissever!"
Editor's note
Olaf's proclamation is a bounty — and importantly, both Hakon and Karker hear it through the breathing holes. The reward stirs temptation in the slave. Meanwhile, Thora weeps alone in her chamber, cut off from Hakon and unable to shield him from what lies ahead.
Said Karker, the crafty, "I will not slay thee! / For all the king's gold I will never betray thee!"
Editor's note
Karker's denial is overly loud and oddly specific—he objects to precisely what he's considering. Hakon observes Karker's face shifting from pale to black, which in Norse tradition indicates a man struggling with a murderous thought. Thora, portrayed as "more pale and more faithful," serves as the quiet contrast: her paleness stems from grief, not guilt.
From a dream in the night the thrall started, saying, / "Round my neck a gold ring King Olaf was laying!"
Editor's note
Karker dreams of the king putting a gold ring around his neck — a reward. Hakon sees it differently: the king will put a "blood-red ring" around his neck, suggesting a noose or a blade. This ring imagery ties back to Thora, who looks at her own ring, representing her connection to Hakon that is soon to be broken.
At daybreak slept Hakon, with sorrows encumbered, / But screamed and drew up his feet as he slumbered;
Editor's note
Hakon finally succumbs to exhaustion and falls asleep, only for Karker to kill him in the darkness. The physicality of the scene — the screams and the drawing up of his feet — is jarring and immediate. Longfellow doesn't dwell on the violence; the horror hits hard in just one line. Thora, on the other hand, never sleeps: she remains awake and weeping, as if she’s been keeping a vigil that she knew would end in this manner.
At Nidarholm the priests are all singing, / Two ghastly heads on the gibbet are swinging;
Editor's note
The poem concludes with a public spectacle. Priests sing, crowds cheer, and two heads hang from a gibbet — Hakon's and Karker's, the betrayer and the betrayed united in death. The irony is striking: Karker murdered Hakon for the gold ring but ended up facing a death sentence instead. Meanwhile, Thora, alone in her chamber, swoons. The world celebrates; she collapses. Her private sorrow serves as the poem's final image.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The pigsty / cave
- The hiding spot under the pigs intentionally contrasts Hakon's former status as a great earl. A man who once led armies now finds himself crouching in dirt. This imagery indicates that his power has vanished even before Karker picks up a knife.
- The gold ring
- The ring shows up twice: first in Karker's dream as a gift from the king, and then on Thora's finger as a sign of love. Hakon views the dream ring differently, seeing it as a noose. This symbol connects greed, loyalty, and doom — its meaning shifts dramatically based on who perceives it.
- Karker's changing face (pale and black)
- The slave's face, shifting from pale to dark, reflects his inner turmoil. In Norse saga tradition, such physical signs indicate a man on the brink of a significant decision. This stands in stark contrast to Thora, whose paleness symbolizes faithfulness rather than betrayal.
- The gibbet at Nidarholm
- The gibbet where both heads hang represents public justice and spectacle — yet it also blurs the line between the earl and his slave. In death, they stand as equals, side by side, offering a stark commentary on power and betrayal.
- Thora's chamber
- Thora's chamber is her private refuge away from the public turmoil outside. It’s where she cries, where she stays awake with worry, and ultimately where she collapses. This space embodies her helpless loyalty — she can conceal Hakon but cannot rescue him, turning the chamber into a prison of sorrow.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- anapestic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- AABB·· AABB·· AABB·· AABB·· AABB·· AABB·· AABB·· AABB··
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
Is this poem based on a real historical event?
Yes. Jarl Hakon Sigurdsson was a real Norse chieftain who ruled Norway in the late 10th century. He died after being betrayed by his slave Karker while hiding at the farm of a woman named Thora. This event is documented in Heimskringla, a collection of Norse kings' sagas written by Snorri Sturluson in the 13th century. Longfellow closely follows this saga account.
Why does Karker kill Hakon if he said he wouldn't?
Karker is lured by King Olaf's offer — a promise of wealth and fame for anyone who brings him Hakon's head. His dream of the gold ring shows his true thoughts. Hakon even cautions him: the king's "ring" will mean death, not fortune. Karker goes ahead and kills Hakon, and the prophecy unfolds — he is executed right after.
What does the refrain "Thora, the fairest of women" mean each time it appears?
The refrain changes its role in each stanza. In the beginning, it presents Thora as a symbol of beauty and significance. As the poem takes a darker turn, the refrain becomes more ironic — she is described as "the fairest," yet completely powerless. By the last stanza, when she faints alone, the phrase feels almost like a mournful cry. Longfellow employs repetition to give the same words increasing depth and significance.
Why does Hakon hide under a pigsty? Isn't that beneath his dignity?
That’s precisely the point. Hakon was once one of the most powerful men in Norway, but by the time he arrives at Thora’s, he has lost everything. The pigsty is the only place he can find shelter, and Thora offers it out of love, not malice. This degradation adds to the tragedy — a once-great earl now forced to hide in filth while his enemy rides triumphantly through the valley above.
What is the significance of Karker's face turning pale and then black?
In Norse saga tradition, a person's face changing color indicates an inner moral conflict — particularly, the temptation to commit a grave act. Hakon observes this change and understands its significance. Longfellow employs this as a dramatic tool to foreshadow the impending betrayal, heightening the tension in the cave scenes.
Who is King Olaf in this poem?
Olaf Tryggvason reigned as King of Norway from about 995 to 1000 AD. He was a Christian monarch who sought to convert Norway by force, viewing Hakon, a pagan, not only as a political rival but also as a religious foe. Hakon's pursuit drives the entire poem.
Why does Thora swoon at the end instead of doing something?
Thora has felt powerless all along — she managed to hide Hakon but couldn't shield him from Karker or prevent Olaf's reward. Her fainting at the end represents a grief that has no outlet. While the world outside is celebrating, she crumbles in solitude. Longfellow uses her physical reaction to illustrate the price of loyalty when it falls short.
What collection does this poem come from?
It is included in Longfellow's Tales of a Wayside Inn, a collection of interconnected narratives published from 1863 to 1873. The collection features a frame story where travelers at an inn share their tales, inspired by Chaucer's Canterbury Tales. "Thora of Rimol" is part of the Musician's Tale, which draws from Norse history and legend.
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "Thora of Rimol." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/thora-of-rimol-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). Thora of rimol. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/thora-of-rimol-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Thora of Rimol,' Longfellow constructs a ballad where the refrain 'the fairest of women' accumulates ironic weight with each stanza, transforming from a courtly epithet into a marker of grief, fidelity, and eventually collapse, arguing …
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