The Annotated Edition
THE CONTRACT was considered almost as binding as a marriage. Remember by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
This excerpt from Longfellow's prose-poem captures a community tradition where a young man is provided with a home, land, and supplies before he receives his chosen partner along with her dowry of livestock.
- Core theme
- Family
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
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§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
THE CONTRACT was considered almost as binding as a marriage.
Editor's note
The opening line establishes the legal and social significance of the arrangement. By likening the contract to marriage instead of suggesting they are the same, Longfellow (drawing on Raynal) indicates that formal marriage represents the highest level of commitment, while this community contract nearly matches that standard. It positions what follows as a serious and structured social institution rather than a mere casual agreement.
As soon as a young man arrived at the proper age, the community built him a house...
Editor's note
Here, the community functions like a collective parent or sponsor. The term 'proper age' suggests a rite of passage acknowledged by all, not just the person involved. The actions — constructing a house, cultivating land, providing essentials — are hands-on and tangible, illustrating that this society demonstrated care through effort and resources instead of mere ceremonies.
Then he received the partner whom he had chosen, and who brought him her portion in flocks.
Editor's note
The word 'received' feels transactional and contrasts with 'chosen,' which suggests a shared desire. The woman's contribution — her 'portion in flocks' — represents her economic investment in the union, functioning as a dowry in livestock. The passage concludes on this practical note, anchoring the romantic agreement in the tangible realms of property and survival.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The house
- The house built by the community is more than just a shelter; it represents belonging, readiness, and social support. A man isn’t seen as ready for partnership until the community physically creates the space for it.
- Broken land
- Breaking the land around the house opens up new possibilities — turning raw earth into something productive. It ties the couple's future to the fertility and hard work of the land.
- Flocks (the woman's portion)
- The livestock the woman brings symbolize her family's stake in the union and her personal economic identity. They are active, breathing assets — not just idle wealth, but something that thrives and needs care, similar to the relationship itself.
§06Historical context
Historical context
§07FAQ
Questions readers ask
Is this actually a poem, or is it just a prose note?
It sits right on the border. Longfellow includes it as an epigraph or explanatory note, and it reads like prose, but its careful rhythm and progression from social contract to intimate union lend it a poetic structure. Consider it a prose poem or a lyric fragment—the distinction between the two was much more fluid in the nineteenth century.
Who is Abbé Raynal and why does Longfellow cite him?
Guillaume-Thomas Raynal (1713–1796) was a French philosopher and historian, widely recognized for his extensive work Histoire des deux Indes, which examines European colonialism and the diverse customs of various peoples globally. Longfellow references him to anchor the passage in historical reality and to draw on the credibility of an Enlightenment thinker. This reference also indicates that the custom being described is genuine, rather than a fabrication.
What society is being described here?
Raynal's original text discusses various societies, and without the broader context of the work this passage comes from, it's tough to identify a specific group. The practices mentioned—building houses as a community, preparing land, and offering livestock as dowries—align with descriptions of multiple Indigenous North American or early colonial communities that Raynal recorded.
What does 'broke the land' mean?
To 'break' land refers to plowing or tilling it for the first time, turning over untouched soil to prepare it for farming. This is tough physical work, and the community's collective effort for the young man highlights the importance they place on his transition into adult partnership.
Why does the woman 'bring a portion in flocks' rather than money?
In many pre-industrial societies, livestock served as the main measure of transferable wealth. Flocks of sheep, goats, or cattle could be counted, moved, and traded. A 'portion in flocks' refers to a dowry given in animals instead of coins or land — it indicates that the woman's family has genuine economic status and is investing it in the new household.
What is the significance of the contract being 'almost as binding as a marriage'?
That one word, "almost," carries significant meaning. It indicates that formal marriage still had the most legal and social importance in this society, but it also reveals that the community respected pre-marital contracts enough to support them with collective efforts—like building houses, clearing land, and supplying resources. The contract wasn't just a casual promise.
How does this passage connect to Longfellow's larger themes?
Longfellow often expressed the belief that love and partnership aren't just personal experiences; they are influenced by the community, history, and the environment around us. This passage, depicting a community coming together to create a home for a young couple, aligns perfectly with that perspective.
What does this passage say about gender roles?
The passage illustrates the gender assumptions present in both Raynal's and Longfellow's times. The man is portrayed as reaching a 'proper age' and 'receiving' a partner, while the woman is depicted based on what she contributes. However, her 'portion in flocks' provides her with genuine economic agency — she isn't coming empty-handed but as someone investing in the new household.
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "THE CONTRACT was considered almost as binding as a marriage. Remember." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/the-contract-was-considered-almost-as-binding-as-a-marriage-remember-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). The contract was considered almost as binding as a marriage. remember. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/the-contract-was-considered-almost-as-binding-as-a-marriage-remember-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
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