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RHYMES by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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This short poem is Longfellow's subtle defense of his poetry against critics who might view it as awkward or foreign.

Poet
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
Meter
trochaic octameter
Rhyme
AABB
Themes
art, home, identity
The PoemFull text

RHYMES

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

If perhaps these rhymes of mine should sound not well in strangers' ears, They have only to bethink them that it happens so with theirs; For so long as words, like mortals, call a fatherland their own, They will be most highly valued where they are best and longest known.

Public domain

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§01Quick summary

What this poem is about

This short poem is Longfellow's subtle defense of his poetry against critics who might view it as awkward or foreign. He emphasizes that every language — and every poet's voice — sounds most natural and cherished at home, among those who are familiar with it. It's a quiet, confident shrug: don’t be concerned if outsiders don’t understand it.

§02Themes

Recurring themes

§03Line by line

Stanza by stanza, with notes

  1. If perhaps these rhymes of mine should sound not well in strangers' ears,

    Editor's note

    The poem consists of a single four-line stanza, so this entry addresses all of it. Longfellow starts by envisioning a critic — likely a European reader — who perceives his American verse as clumsy or off-key. Instead of apologizing, he flips the critique: naturally, his rhymes may sound odd to outsiders because *every* poet's words feel unfamiliar to those who haven’t grown up with them. The analogy of "mortals" claiming a country as their own is pivotal — words, like people, have a sense of belonging, and they resonate most powerfully with those familiar with them. The tone is gentle and confident, not defensive. Longfellow essentially asserts that home-field advantage exists, applying to language as much as it does to people.

§04Tone & mood

How this poem feels

Calm and quietly self-assured. Longfellow has a hint of dry wit as he turns the criticism back on the critic, yet he never comes across as bitter or combative. The overall vibe is one of relaxed confidence — a poet at ease with himself, making his defense feel almost like a nonchalant shrug.

§05Symbols & metaphors

Symbols & metaphors

Rhymes
Longfellow’s poetry reflects not only his own voice but also any creative work that echoes its origins. By choosing such straightforward titles for his verses, he encourages readers to view them as simple, relatable expressions instead of lofty artistic landmarks.
Strangers' ears
The foreign or unfamiliar audience refers to anyone who didn't grow up within the language and culture that influenced the poem. They represent the distance between the poem's local context and the broader world.
Words as mortals / fatherland
The poem's main metaphor suggests that words resemble people connected to a homeland. Just as someone is best understood by their own community, a poem resonates most deeply with readers who share its language and cultural background.

§06Form & structure

Form & structure

Meter
trochaic octameter
Rhyme
AABB

§07Historical context

Historical context

Longfellow wrote at a time when American literature was still trying to earn respect on both sides of the Atlantic. British critics often dismissed American poetry as provincial, and even sympathetic European readers found its rhythms and references a bit strange. Longfellow was among the first American poets to gain real international recognition—his *Song of Hiawatha* (1855) and *Evangeline* (1847) were popular in Europe—but he was keenly aware of the cultural gap between his New England life and his foreign audience. This brief epigram feels like a note he might have slipped into a collection sent overseas: a light-hearted, preemptive response to the likely complaint that his verses sound off to foreign listeners. It also echoes the broader Romantic interest of the 19th century in the notion that language is tied to place and people, a concept discussed by thinkers like Herder and later explored by American Transcendentalists.

§08FAQ

Questions readers ask

He's saying: if my poems sound a bit off to you, remember that your poems would sound just as off to me. Every language — and every poet's voice — feels most natural to those who grew up with it.

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