The Annotated Edition
Gudrun by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
On his wedding night, King Olaf wakes up to find his new bride, Gudrun, looming over him with a concealed dagger, determined to avenge her father's murder.
- Core theme
- Betrayal
Study actions
§01Quick summary
What this poem is about
§02Themes
Recurring themes
§03Line by line
Stanza by stanza, with notes
On King Olaf's bridal night / Shines the moon with tender light,
Editor's note
Longfellow begins with a false sense of tranquility. The moonlight feels romantic—it's a wedding night, after all—but the word "tender" will soon take on an ironic twist. In this context, the moon acts as a witness rather than a blessing.
At the fatal midnight hour, / When all evil things have power,
Editor's note
Midnight was considered the traditional witching hour in Norse and medieval European belief. Longfellow indicates that what comes next is rooted in dark folklore rather than courtly romance. The word "fatal" carries significant weight—it implies both deadly and fated.
Close against her heaving breast / Something in her hand is pressed
Editor's note
We notice the weapon before we understand what it is. The simile "like an icicle" reveals it all: it's cold, sharp, and lethal. The detail of her heaving breast indicates her agitation as she prepares herself for the action ahead.
On the cairn are fixed her eyes / Where her murdered father lies,
Editor's note
A cairn is a pile of stones that marks a grave. Gudrun gazes at her father's burial mound, finding her motivation in it. This is the driving force of the entire poem: she isn’t a villain; she’s a daughter fulfilling a blood debt.
What a bridal night is this! / Cold will be the dagger's kiss;
Editor's note
Longfellow allows his narrator to speak directly, using grim irony. A kiss is supposed to be the warmest promise of a wedding night; here, it belongs to a blade. The word "breath" in the next line deepens the metaphor — the dagger is almost personified as a cold, death-breathing entity.
Like the drifting snow she sweeps / To the couch where Olaf sleeps;
Editor's note
The snow simile gives Gudrun a ghostly and inevitable quality, resembling a natural force instead of a person making a decision. Then the moment shifts: Olaf wakes. The drama changes completely in just two brief lines.
"What is that," King Olaf said, / "Gleams so bright above thy head?"
Editor's note
Olaf's question is steady yet sharp. He catches the shine of the weapon in the moonlight. By asking what glimmers above her head, he almost presents her as a dark angel, weapon held high.
"'T is the bodkin that I wear / When at night I bind my hair;
Editor's note
A bodkin is just a long hairpin, which makes for a good cover story. Gudrun's lie comes out smoothly and without hesitation. She says it dropped and woke her up — a tidy reason for why she's standing over him. It nearly convinces.
"Forests have ears, and fields have eyes; / Often treachery lurking lies
Editor's note
Olaf's response is a proverb—he's not easily deceived. Rather than making direct accusations, he offers a caution through folk wisdom, signaling that he understands the situation perfectly. The phrase "Underneath the fairest hair" connects the warning directly to her bodkin excuse.
Ere the earliest peep of morn / Blew King Olaf's bugle-horn;
Editor's note
The bugle-horn signals it's time to ride out. Olaf doesn't punish Gudrun; he just walks away. The marriage dissolves before dawn. The last couplet, "forever sundered ride / Bridegroom and bride," hits hard, like a door slamming shut.
§04Tone & mood
How this poem feels
§05Symbols & metaphors
Symbols & metaphors
- The dagger / bodkin
- The weapon is the focal point of the poem. As a dagger, it symbolizes Gudrun's obligation to seek revenge for her father's murder. As a "bodkin" — her deceit — it illustrates how violence can lurk beneath the surface of the mundane. The simile of the icicle connects it to cold, death, and the harsh Norse winter landscape that the poem explores.
- The moon
- The moon begins the poem with a deceptive softness, only to reveal its betrayal — its light makes the dagger shine and exposes Gudrun. It observes the botched assassination as it does everything else: quietly and without compassion.
- The cairn
- The stone grave-mound of Gudrun's murdered father serves as the poem's moral center. It's what she fixes her gaze on as she gathers her courage. This mound represents the blood-debt culture of the Norse world, where a daughter's obligation to her deceased father can take precedence over everything else, even her wedding night.
- The bugle-horn
- Olaf's horn at dawn marks both the departure and the end. In Norse and medieval tradition, the horn summoned warriors to action. Here, it signifies the conclusion of a marriage rather than the beginning of a conflict — yet the impact remains the same: a clear, unchangeable separation.
- Drifting snow
- The simile comparing Gudrun to weather as she approaches Olaf's bed makes her seem elemental and unavoidable, almost like a force of nature rather than a person. It also highlights the poem's overall coldness — everything here feels wintry, even love and revenge.
§06Form & structure
Form & structure
- Meter
- trochaic tetrameter
- Rhyme
- AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL MMNN OOPP QQRR SSTT
§07Historical context
Historical context
§08FAQ
Questions readers ask
Is this poem based on a real Norse legend?
Yes. Gudrun is a well-known figure in Old Norse literature, found in the Völsunga saga and the Poetic Edda. In these texts, she is the wife of the hero Sigurd and later marries Atli (Attila the Hun). Her narrative revolves around themes of loss and revenge. Longfellow took creative liberties with her story, incorporating her into a tale with King Olaf instead of sticking strictly to the saga.
Why doesn't Gudrun just kill Olaf? What stops her?
He wakes up. That's the entire turning point of the poem. She holds the weapon, she has the motive, and she has crept to his bedside — and then his eyes open and lock onto hers. This moment of connection shatters the spell. Longfellow doesn’t reveal her feelings at that moment, which makes it more impactful: we can't tell if she hesitates because of fear, pity, or something else entirely.
What is a bodkin?
A bodkin is a long, pointed pin that women used to fasten hair or thread ribbon through fabric. It was a staple in a woman's kit during medieval and early modern periods. Gudrun's assertion that she's holding a bodkin that fell and woke her seems like a believable lie — in dim moonlight, bodkins could appear long and thin enough to look like a small blade.
Does Olaf know she was trying to kill him?
Almost certainly yes. His proverb — "Forests have ears, and fields have eyes; / Often treachery lurking lies / Underneath the fairest hair" — is a clear, if subtle, accusation. He’s letting her know he sees through the lie. The choice to ride away at dawn instead of having her arrested or punished indicates that he prefers to end the marriage quietly rather than confront her directly.
What does "the cairn" mean?
A cairn is a pile of stones that marks a grave, often found in Norse and Celtic traditions. In the poem, Gudrun gazes at the cairn where her father, murdered, rests. This moment fuels her determination to kill Olaf; she's driven by a sense of duty to avenge her father's death.
Why does Longfellow use so many cold and icy images?
The cold imagery — icicles, drifting snow, and the chill of death — serves two purposes. First, it aligns perfectly with the Norse setting, where winter and ice are woven into the cultural fabric. Second, it enhances the theme: this wedding night is devoid of warmth. Instead of love, marriage, and intimacy, we see cold metal and a cold purpose. This imagery transforms the betrayal into something that feels inevitable, like a force of nature.
What is the IX at the end of the poem?
The IX refers to a section number. In Tales of a Wayside Inn, the extended saga of King Olaf is split into numbered sections, with "Gudrun" being one episode in that larger series. The number indicates its position within the overall narrative.
Is Gudrun a villain in this poem?
Longfellow doesn't portray her as a villain. She's seeking to avenge her father's murder, which, in Norse morality, is seen as a duty rather than wrongdoing. The poem provides her with the cairn, moonlight, and the voice of her deceased father—elements that highlight her actions driven by grief and obligation, not malice. Even Olaf doesn't punish her, indicating he recognizes her motivations.
Citation
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MLA
Longfellow, Henry Wadsworth. "Gudrun." Storgy, https://storgy.com/poems/gudrun-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/.
APA
Longfellow, H. W. (n.d.). Gudrun. Storgy. https://storgy.com/poems/gudrun-henry-wadsworth-longfellow/
Row A — Thesis
1 ptIn 'Gudrun,' Longfellow creates a sustained tension between cold and warmth—moonlight, icicle-bright daggers, and chilled breath set against a bridal bed—to argue that the codes of patriarchal honor corrupt the very rituals meant to …
- Row B — Evidence + Commentary4 pts
- Row C — Sophistication1 pt
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