Poem B
I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud
The speaker in "Tintern Abbey" feels deeply aware of himself and carries a philosophical weight. He recognizes his aging, reflects on the shifts in his inner life through three different stages of growth, and speaks to both the absent river and his sister who is with him now. His happiness isn’t straightforward; he constantly contemplates what happiness entails and the price it carries.
The speaker in "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" is quite open. He walks around, observes, feels joy, and then feels joy again later. The deep self-reflection found in "Tintern Abbey" is largely missing here. He doesn't question why the daffodils affect him; he simply states that they do.
"Tintern Abbey" is composed in blank verse, which is unrhymed iambic pentameter, and it spans 159 lines with no stanza breaks. This form reflects the poem's argument: it continuously moves forward, revisiting ideas, adding nuances, and avoids a neat resolution until the final lines.
"I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" consists of four stanzas, each with six lines that follow an ABABCC rhyme scheme. This regular structure contributes to the poem's meaning, reflecting the neatness and wholeness of the memory it captures. In contrast, it feels complete in a way that "Tintern Abbey" intentionally avoids.
The central image in "Tintern Abbey" is the Wye Valley itself—cliffs, hedgerows, patches of orchards, and wreaths of smoke rising from the trees. It’s a complete landscape, and Wordsworth describes it meticulously, like someone returning after a long absence, eager to reassure himself that it truly exists.
The main focus of "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" is clear and specific: a field of daffodils swaying beside a lake in the wind. While Wordsworth in "Tintern Abbey" takes in a broad view, here he sharpens his attention on one bright, cheerful detail that conveys the essence of the poem.
"Tintern Abbey" concludes with Wordsworth addressing Dorothy, hoping she will enjoy the same connection with nature that has supported him. The last lines serve as a gift—Wordsworth offering the beauty of the landscape to her, aware that he might not always be around to experience it together.
"I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud" wraps up with a reflective moment. The speaker sits alone on his couch, the daffodils have faded, but his heart still "dances with the daffodils." The poem finishes in a personal solitude, mirroring its opening — creating a satisfying circularity.