We wear the mask that grins and lies, It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes,— This debt we pay to human guile; With torn and bleeding hearts we smile, And mouth with myriad subtleties.
Why it works
Dunbar's opening stanza highlights the essential techniques that slam poets adopt: a bold first line that makes an immediate assertion, a rhythmic end-rhyme that propels the piece forward, and a collective 'we' that invites the audience into the poem's argument. The stark contrast between the smiling mask and the wounded, bleeding heart beneath creates a powerful emotional shift that a live audience can physically sense. Slam poets analyze this poem specifically because it embodies its meaning — the mask represents the poem's outer layer, while the pain is the emotion that the form struggles to contain.